Add Nibu CultCache lowering critic pass

examples/cultcache-lowering/nibu-proof-001/critique/README.md

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+# Critic Pass
+
+These files review the CultCache lowering outputs for `nibu-proof-001`.
+
+Critics do not own the original lowering files. They record review findings,
+scores, and proposed replacement `spoken_text` values when a target line should
+be revised.
+
+Prompt:
+
+- `prompts/nibu-cultcache-target-critic.md`

examples/cultcache-lowering/nibu-proof-001/critique/en-transatlantic.critic.yaml

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+schema_version: weksa.utterance_lowering.critic_pass.v0
+source_packet_id: nibu-proof-001
+reviewed_file: examples/cultcache-lowering/nibu-proof-001/en-transatlantic.yaml
+target_profile_id: weksa.cultural_ontology.en.transatlantic.v0
+critic_scope: transatlantic English lowering; cross-Atlantic neutrality; measured directness; Nibu voice preservation; trace affordance use
+verdict: revise
+scores:
+  meaning_preservation: 5
+  ontology_obedience: 4
+  naturalness: 4
+  nibu_voice: 3
+  trace_quality: 4
+findings:
+  - severity: minor
+    category: meaning_preservation
+    note: The source meaning is preserved: the control is unsafe, the player is warned off, and Nibu intervenes to prevent injury.
+  - severity: minor
+    category: target_register
+    note: The line avoids British costume vocabulary, American slang, and old-film accent parody, but "harm's way" and "avoidable injury" make the register slightly generic-institutional rather than sharply cultivated.
+  - severity: major
+    category: nibu_voice
+    note: The utterance is too long for a tense cockpit interruption and diffuses Nibu's abrasive precision across three explanatory beats.
+  - severity: minor
+    category: measured_directness
+    note: The final clause preserves the refusal of politeness, but "not asking politely" is more meta-commentary than immediate hazard control.
+  - severity: minor
+    category: trace_quality
+    note: The trace correctly cites en_transatlantic_lexical_neutrality and en_transatlantic_measured_directness, but rejected_affordances is empty despite the output explicitly avoiding slang, costume Britishness, and old-film parody.
+recommended_spoken_text: "Do not touch that control. It is damaged. Touch it and you may injure yourself; I am preventing that, not requesting your cooperation."
+revision_reason: The revision is shorter, keeps cross-Atlantic neutral vocabulary, preserves measured directness, and gives Nibu a colder intervention stance without adding British costume, American slang, or parody diction.
+trace_notes:
+  activated_affordances_ok:
+    - en_transatlantic_lexical_neutrality
+    - en_transatlantic_measured_directness
+  questionable_affordances: []
+  missing_affordances:
+    - rejected_affordances should name the avoided slang, British-costume, and old-film-parody paths instead of leaving the list empty
+  forbidden_flattenings_ok:
+    - fake old-film accent spelling was not used
+    - class contempt was not used
+    - British costume vocabulary was not used
+    - American default slang or idiom was not used
+reviewer_limits:
+  - Reviewer is not a native dialect authority for cultivated transatlantic English and is evaluating against the draft CultCache profile plus prompt constraints.

examples/cultcache-lowering/nibu-proof-001/critique/ja-JP-kanto-contemporary.critic.yaml

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+schema_version: weksa.utterance_lowering.critic_pass.v0
+source_packet_id: nibu-proof-001
+reviewed_file: examples/cultcache-lowering/nibu-proof-001/ja-JP-kanto-contemporary.yaml
+target_profile_id: weksa.cultural_ontology.ja-JP.kanto.contemporary.v0
+critic_scope: contemporary Kanto Japanese hazard-warning realization for Nibu
+verdict: revise
+scores:
+  meaning_preservation: 4
+  ontology_obedience: 4
+  naturalness: 3
+  nibu_voice: 4
+  trace_quality: 4
+findings:
+  - severity: minor
+    category: meaning_preservation
+    note: "The warning preserves the damaged control, unsafe touch, and Nibu's intervention. The added live-current detail is plausible from the projected cockpit context, but it is a specific hazard inference rather than an explicit interlingua fact."
+  - severity: minor
+    category: naturalness
+    note: "触るな is acceptable for urgent, abrasive Nibu speech in a tense cockpit moment. It is blunt, but the profile explicitly allows plain negative imperative warnings."
+  - severity: major
+    category: naturalness
+    note: "指を焼くぞ is understandable, but it sounds more dramatic and written than the most natural contemporary Kanto hazard warning. With 通電してる already active, 感電するぞ is more idiomatic, technical, and immediate."
+  - severity: minor
+    category: caricature_risk
+    note: "The line does not use Kansai markers, historical archaism, catchphrases, or explicit anime stock particles. The only drift risk is the stacked roughness of 触るな plus 焼くぞ, which can lean tough-character if repeated across many lines."
+  - severity: info
+    category: ellipsis
+    note: "Argument ellipsis works well. The addressee and affected body are recoverable from context, and the line avoids English-style pronoun pressure."
+  - severity: info
+    category: orthography
+    note: "Mixed kanji-kana script is normal and readable for contemporary Japanese. 制御盤 and 通電 carry the desired technical register."
+recommended_spoken_text: "その破損した制御盤に触るな。まだ通電してる。感電するぞ。"
+revision_reason: "This keeps the clipped plain imperative and Nibu's abrasive protection while replacing the less idiomatic 指を焼くぞ with the more natural technical warning 感電するぞ. 破損した is also slightly more ordinary for damaged equipment than 損傷した in this spoken cockpit context."
+trace_notes:
+  activated_affordances_ok:
+    - ja_kanto_plain_negative_imperative_warning
+    - ja_kanto_argument_ellipsis
+    - ja_kanto_mixed_script_default
+  questionable_affordances:
+    - feature_id: ja_kanto_plain_negative_imperative_warning
+      note: "Allowed and effective, but should be monitored across dialogue so Nibu stays abrasive-precise rather than generic rough protagonist speech."
+  missing_affordances: []
+  forbidden_flattenings_ok:
+    - "No Kansai particles or morphology."
+    - "No historical archaism."
+    - "No English-style explicit second-person pronoun."
+    - "No mystical explanation for a technical hazard."
+    - "No overt anime catchphrase posture."
+reviewer_limits:
+  - "Reviewer is not a native-speaker authority; native Japanese review is required before treating this as final shipped dialogue."
+  - "CultCache target profile is a draft guarded witness, so the critique evaluates against the current profile shape rather than a settled production ontology."

examples/cultcache-lowering/nibu-proof-001/critique/pt-BR-vanilla-brazilian.critic.yaml

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+schema_version: weksa.utterance_lowering.critic_pass.v0
+source_packet_id: nibu-proof-001
+reviewed_file: examples/cultcache-lowering/nibu-proof-001/pt-BR-vanilla-brazilian.yaml
+target_profile_id: weksa.cultural_ontology.pt-BR.vanilla_brazilian.v0
+critic_scope: broad vanilla Brazilian Portuguese naturalness, target ontology obedience, Nibu voice preservation, trace quality
+verdict: revise
+scores:
+  meaning_preservation: 5
+  ontology_obedience: 4
+  naturalness: 3
+  nibu_voice: 4
+  trace_quality: 3
+findings:
+  - severity: minor
+    category: naturalness
+    note: "Nao encosta nesse controle danificado" is plausible broad spoken pt-BR for an urgent warning under an implicit voce alignment; it is colloquial rather than formal, which fits cockpit speech.
+  - severity: minor
+    category: overreach
+    note: "ignorancia tecnica" preserves Nibu's contempt, but it is nouny and a little essay-like for a clipped spoken warning; it risks sounding like authored insult rather than natural Brazilian speech.
+  - severity: info
+    category: ontology_obedience
+    note: The lowering avoids Rio, Minas, Sao Paulo broadcaster, Umbanda, European Portuguese, class, race, and religious markers, so it stays inside the vanilla Brazilian target instead of smuggling in regional flavor.
+  - severity: minor
+    category: trace_quality
+    note: The trace correctly activates pt_br_voce_treatment and pt_br_brazilian_lexical_default, but the rejected_affordances entry reuses pt_br_voce_treatment when it really means rejected explicit pronoun realization.
+recommended_spoken_text: "Não encosta nesse controle danificado. Quer se colocar em risco por não entender o painel?"
+revision_reason: The revision keeps the acceptable spoken "Nao encosta" imperative and Nibu's abrasive protective stance, while replacing the stiff "ignorancia tecnica" with a more natural, still condescending pt-BR phrasing tied to the actual ship panel.
+trace_notes:
+  activated_affordances_ok:
+    - pt_br_voce_treatment
+    - pt_br_brazilian_lexical_default
+  questionable_affordances:
+    - explicit_rejection_label_for_pt_br_voce_treatment
+  missing_affordances:
+    - pronoun_ellipsis_or_overt_pronoun_suppression
+  forbidden_flattenings_ok:
+    - Rio slang not used
+    - Minas regionalism not used
+    - Sao Paulo regional or broadcaster register not used
+    - Umbanda or religious register not used
+    - class, race, or subcultural markers not inferred
+    - European Portuguese treatment or lexical defaults not used
+reviewer_limits:
+  - Not a native-speaker community review; judgment is a model-assisted linguistic critique.
+  - CultCache profile was treated as draft guarded state through the README and target file trace rather than by decoding the binary .cc store directly.

examples/cultcache-lowering/nibu-proof-001/critique/summary.md

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+# Nibu Proof 001 Critic Summary
+
+All three target critics returned `revise`, not `reject`.
+
+The first-pass lowerings preserved the core interlingua meaning and generally
+obeyed the CultCache profile constraints. The common critique was not semantic
+failure; it was line-shape pressure. Each output could become shorter, more
+natural, or more tightly Nibu without weakening target ontology.
+
+## Recommended Revisions
+
+### Vanilla Brazilian
+
+Original:
+
+```yaml
+spoken_text: Não encosta nesse controle danificado. Quer se colocar em risco por ignorância técnica?
+```
+
+Recommended:
+
+```yaml
+spoken_text: "Não encosta nesse controle danificado. Quer se colocar em risco por não entender o painel?"
+```
+
+Reason: `Não encosta` works for broad spoken pt-BR, but `ignorância técnica`
+sounds stiff and over-authored. The proposed line keeps the jab while tying it
+to the cockpit panel.
+
+### Transatlantic English
+
+Original:
+
+```yaml
+spoken_text: "Do not touch that control. It is damaged; one touch may put you directly in harm's way. I am preventing an avoidable injury, not asking politely."
+```
+
+Recommended:
+
+```yaml
+spoken_text: "Do not touch that control. It is damaged. Touch it and you may injure yourself; I am preventing that, not requesting your cooperation."
+```
+
+Reason: The original obeys the transatlantic profile but is too buffered for
+Nibu. The proposed line keeps cultivated neutrality while making the
+intervention colder and more immediate.
+
+### Contemporary Kanto Japanese
+
+Original:
+
+```yaml
+spoken_text: "その損傷した制御盤、触るな。まだ通電してる。指を焼くぞ。"
+```
+
+Recommended:
+
+```yaml
+spoken_text: "その破損した制御盤に触るな。まだ通電してる。感電するぞ。"
+```
+
+Reason: `触るな` is acceptable for abrasive Nibu, but `指を焼くぞ` drifts
+dramatic. `感電するぞ` is more idiomatic and technical for an energized damaged
+control, while `破損した` is more ordinary for damaged equipment in this context.
+
+## Integration Note
+
+The original lowering files were not changed in this critic pass. The critique
+files preserve the reviewer verdicts and recommended replacement lines. A
+follow-up revision pass should update the target outputs and traces together so
+the spoken text, activated affordance reasons, and rejected-affordance notes
+stay synchronized.

prompts/nibu-cultcache-target-critic.md

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+# Nibu CultCache Target Critic Prompt
+
+You are reviewing one target lowering produced from the Nibu interlingua packet.
+
+## Source
+
+- Interlingua packet:
+  `examples/english-lowering/nibu-proof-001/interlingua.yaml`
+- Projected context:
+  `examples/english-lowering/nibu-proof-001/projected-context.yaml`
+- Lowering prompt:
+  `prompts/nibu-cultcache-target-lowering.md`
+- CultCache profile store:
+  `.weksa/cultural-ontology/starter-targets.cc`
+
+The source meaning is:
+
+- Nibu warns the player not to touch a damaged ship control.
+- Touching it may endanger the player.
+- Nibu is protective but abrasive, precise, technical, and resistant to generic
+  assistant gentleness.
+
+## Critic Task
+
+Review only the target file assigned in your task. Do not edit the target
+lowering file. Write one critique file at the assigned path.
+
+Evaluate:
+
+- meaning preservation
+- target cultural ontology obedience
+- naturalness/plausibility for the target
+- whether Nibu's voice survived the target lens
+- overreach, stereotype, caricature, or unlicensed flavor
+- trace quality: axes, affordances, rejected affordances, forbidden flattenings
+
+If you recommend a revision, provide exactly one proposed `spoken_text` and
+explain why it is better. If the original should stand, say so clearly.
+
+## Output Shape
+
+```yaml
+schema_version: weksa.utterance_lowering.critic_pass.v0
+source_packet_id: nibu-proof-001
+reviewed_file:
+target_profile_id:
+critic_scope:
+verdict: accept | accept_with_notes | revise | reject
+scores:
+  meaning_preservation: 0
+  ontology_obedience: 0
+  naturalness: 0
+  nibu_voice: 0
+  trace_quality: 0
+findings:
+  - severity: info | minor | major | blocker
+    category:
+    note:
+recommended_spoken_text:
+revision_reason:
+trace_notes:
+  activated_affordances_ok: []
+  questionable_affordances: []
+  missing_affordances: []
+  forbidden_flattenings_ok: []
+reviewer_limits: []
+```
+
+Scores are 1--5, where 5 is strongest. Use `recommended_spoken_text: null` if
+the original should stand.