45 lines
2.7 KiB
YAML
45 lines
2.7 KiB
YAML
schema_version: weksa.utterance_lowering.critic_pass.v0
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source_packet_id: nibu-proof-001
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reviewed_file: examples/cultcache-lowering/nibu-proof-001/pt-BR-vanilla-brazilian.yaml
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target_profile_id: weksa.cultural_ontology.pt-BR.vanilla_brazilian.v0
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critic_scope: broad vanilla Brazilian Portuguese naturalness, target ontology obedience, Nibu voice preservation, trace quality
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verdict: revise
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scores:
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meaning_preservation: 5
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ontology_obedience: 4
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naturalness: 3
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nibu_voice: 4
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trace_quality: 3
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findings:
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- severity: minor
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category: naturalness
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note: "Nao encosta nesse controle danificado" is plausible broad spoken pt-BR for an urgent warning under an implicit voce alignment; it is colloquial rather than formal, which fits cockpit speech.
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- severity: minor
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category: overreach
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note: "ignorancia tecnica" preserves Nibu's contempt, but it is nouny and a little essay-like for a clipped spoken warning; it risks sounding like authored insult rather than natural Brazilian speech.
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- severity: info
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category: ontology_obedience
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note: The lowering avoids Rio, Minas, Sao Paulo broadcaster, Umbanda, European Portuguese, class, race, and religious markers, so it stays inside the vanilla Brazilian target instead of smuggling in regional flavor.
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- severity: minor
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category: trace_quality
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note: The trace correctly activates pt_br_voce_treatment and pt_br_brazilian_lexical_default, but the rejected_affordances entry reuses pt_br_voce_treatment when it really means rejected explicit pronoun realization.
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recommended_spoken_text: "Não encosta nesse controle danificado. Quer se colocar em risco por não entender o painel?"
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revision_reason: The revision keeps the acceptable spoken "Nao encosta" imperative and Nibu's abrasive protective stance, while replacing the stiff "ignorancia tecnica" with a more natural, still condescending pt-BR phrasing tied to the actual ship panel.
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trace_notes:
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activated_affordances_ok:
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- pt_br_voce_treatment
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- pt_br_brazilian_lexical_default
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questionable_affordances:
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- explicit_rejection_label_for_pt_br_voce_treatment
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missing_affordances:
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- pronoun_ellipsis_or_overt_pronoun_suppression
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forbidden_flattenings_ok:
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- Rio slang not used
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- Minas regionalism not used
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- Sao Paulo regional or broadcaster register not used
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- Umbanda or religious register not used
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- class, race, or subcultural markers not inferred
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- European Portuguese treatment or lexical defaults not used
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reviewer_limits:
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- Not a native-speaker community review; judgment is a model-assisted linguistic critique.
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- CultCache profile was treated as draft guarded state through the README and target file trace rather than by decoding the binary .cc store directly.
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