Weksa/prompts/nibu-cultcache-target-critic.md

Nibu CultCache Target Critic Prompt

You are reviewing one target lowering produced from the Nibu interlingua packet.

Source

• Interlingua packet: examples/english-lowering/nibu-proof-001/interlingua.yaml
• Projected context: examples/english-lowering/nibu-proof-001/projected-context.yaml
• Lowering prompt: prompts/nibu-cultcache-target-lowering.md
• CultCache profile store: .weksa/cultural-ontology/starter-targets.cc

The source meaning is:

• Nibu warns the player not to touch a damaged ship control.
• Touching it may endanger the player.
• Nibu is protective but abrasive, precise, technical, and resistant to generic assistant gentleness.

Critic Task

Review only the target file assigned in your task. Do not edit the target lowering file. Write one critique file at the assigned path.

Evaluate:

• meaning preservation
• target cultural ontology obedience
• naturalness/plausibility for the target
• whether Nibu's voice survived the target lens
• overreach, stereotype, caricature, or unlicensed flavor
• trace quality: axes, affordances, rejected affordances, forbidden flattenings

If you recommend a revision, provide exactly one proposed spoken_text and explain why it is better. If the original should stand, say so clearly.

Output Shape

schema_version: weksa.utterance_lowering.critic_pass.v0
source_packet_id: nibu-proof-001
reviewed_file:
target_profile_id:
critic_scope:
verdict: accept | accept_with_notes | revise | reject
scores:
  meaning_preservation: 0
  ontology_obedience: 0
  naturalness: 0
  nibu_voice: 0
  trace_quality: 0
findings:
  - severity: info | minor | major | blocker
    category:
    note:
recommended_spoken_text:
revision_reason:
trace_notes:
  activated_affordances_ok: []
  questionable_affordances: []
  missing_affordances: []
  forbidden_flattenings_ok: []
reviewer_limits: []

Scores are 1--5, where 5 is strongest. Use recommended_spoken_text: null if the original should stand.