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+# Pass 9 Report: Scene Engineering
+
+## Artifacts
+
+- [[Scene Cards]]
+- [[09 Scene Engineering/Scene Progression Ledger|Scene Progression Ledger]]
+- [[09 Scene Engineering/Simulation Candidate Notes|Simulation Candidate Notes]]
+- [[09 Scene Engineering/Skeptical Review Report|Skeptical Review Report]]
+
+## Decisions
+
+- Ninety scene cards govern the twenty-seven-chapter architecture.
+- Every scene tracks drive, knowledge boundary, bodily/tactical conditions, comic or thematic work, state delta, and setup/payoff obligations.
+- Every scene changes at least two tracked dimensions.
+- The final reader-facing causal spine is “keep one communication path alive while the workers finish choosing.”
+- Scene drafts use strict limits on aphorism density, procedural dialogue, seated negotiation, institutional jokes, and interpretive chapter endings.
+- Each hull receives a distinct sensory palette.
+
+## Contradictions Resolved
+
+- Kavi's passenger evidence arrives before Mara crosses the boarding threshold.
+- The first success uses one eight-drone flight.
+- Hull One's loss retains its second loiterer and correct command ownership.
+- Hull Three's build interval and final-operation cognition prepartition are explicit.
+- Title-vault knowledge reaches Samira through Rhyne's authenticated manifest.
+
+## State Delta
+
+Pass 9 is complete. The retained planning corpus exceeds the 75,000-word requirement. Pass 10 may draft Movement I from the scene cards while appending, but never pausing for, new simulation seams.
+
+## Review Points
+
+- The cards are causal scaffolding, not prose to paraphrase.
+- Pal's alternative life remains attractive after return.
+- Sable and Mara gain operational trust without ideological cleansing.
+- Workers and targets alter plans through their own decisions.
+- Final victory freezes continuity and minimum distributions; later conflict remains.

Aetheria/Brainstorming/Stories/Pirate Metagame Novella/09 Scene Engineering/Scene Progression Ledger.md

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+# Scene Progression Ledger
+
+This ledger guards reader propulsion during drafting. Each chapter has one foreground question and one intended emotional exit. Technical and institutional detail that does not sharpen the question remains sideband.
+
+| Ch. | Foreground question | Intended exit | Dominant scene shape |
+| ---: | --- | --- | --- |
+| 1 | Will Luce spend privilege to save six people, and what does the credential do afterward? | Relief contaminated by revulsion | Rescue into bureaucratic consequence |
+| 2 | Can Luce recruit people without purchasing obedience? | Cautious institutional interest | Two negotiations with different stakes |
+| 3 | Is ship embodiment expansion, service, or both? | Awe with custody anxiety | Sensory awakening and work test |
+| 4 | Does the lavish drone doctrine actually work? | Earned exhilaration | Argument into tactical proof |
+| 5 | Will Luce sacrifice the objective when reuse consumes workers? | Respect plus frustration | Queue crisis and refusal |
+| 6 | What does glamorous piracy look like during repair? | Warm, tired household formation | Dinner and useless social time |
+| 7 | Will Samira abort before stealth becomes collective injury? | Claustrophobic relief | Slow bodily pressure and timestamped refusal |
+| 8 | Will Mara protect a person she cannot classify cleanly? | Moral unease without redemption | Boarding reversal and custody refusal |
+| 9 | Did professional correction solve the physical door? | Social dread | Short review and one material objection |
+| 10 | Can the crew recognize loss before the correct shot makes it irreversible? | Tightened inevitability | Convergence and necessary fire |
+| 11 | Can every person clear before Pal's body fails? | Shock, absence, witnessed trust | Fragmented evacuation and loss |
+| 12 | Who gets to define what rescue means? | Care becoming leverage | One certificate, three uses |
+| 13 | Can the crew inhabit an ugly replacement? | Embarrassed relief | Contract friction and domestic repair |
+| 14 | Is shaped-signature excellence real? | Seduction | Technical beauty and quiet evidence |
+| 15 | Will they risk bodies to reclaim a living ship? | Slow grief and contested respect | Route pressure, tumble, refusal |
+| 16 | Can new excellence make abandonment feel worth repeating? | Mourning turned indecently into pleasure | Embodied silence, clinic scarcity, clean capture |
+| 17 | Will Sable relinquish a real shot whose meaning is corrupted? | Horror and painful respect | Contradiction, command break, injury |
+| 18 | Can rescue preserve lives without preserving ownership? | Exhaustion and an open exit | Custody priority and private answer |
+| 19 | Can the institution build home without Luce or Pal owning every choice? | Tentative renewal | Ballot, correction, naming |
+| 20 | Can Hot doctrine deliver uncomplicated pleasure? | Exhilaration with a crack | Embodied gunnery and objective correction |
+| 21 | Can distributed authority rescue people after winning the wrong fight? | Emotional climax and attachment risk | Objective loss, joint corridor, shepherd |
+| 22 | With money gone, what remains actionable? | Ruin narrowed into purpose | Failed payment and physical claim map |
+| 23 | Has the crew earned the Twelvefold's disclosure? | Respect, unease, anticipation | Parliament and costly release |
+| 24 | If Pal can live well elsewhere, why return? | Relief with unresolved motive | Departure, pleasure elsewhere, bounded return |
+| 25 | Can incompatible people create an operation before their deadlines expire? | Urgent sober admiration | Vetoes, expiry, surrendered priority |
+| 26 | Can distributed authority survive contact without central seizure? | Tense earned competence | Mundane veto, earned ingress, attachment |
+| 27 | Will Luce protect enforceability rather than chase personal title security? | Elation, casualty, durable incompletion | Vote, temptation, interruption, commit, quiet home |
+
+## Scene-Shape Constraints
+
+- No more than two consecutive chapters may end on a formal decision or signed document.
+- Chapters 6, 13, 19, and 24 protect ordinary pleasure and inconvenience from plot compression.
+- Hull-loss chapters contain an interval in which a person addresses the loss without immediately explaining it.
+- Chapters 12 and 18 use documents differently: the first reinterprets a rescue; the second physically transfers custody. Chapter 16 privileges Pal's uninterrupted embodied silence over its allocation handoff.
+- Chapters 22-27 express coalitional politics through veto, delay, refusal, signature, withheld access, and sacrificed value rather than constituency speeches.
+- Chapter 27 presents one foreground question at a time: vote, temptation, casualty, movement, commit, disengagement, home.
+
+## Reader-Naming Budget
+
+The finale foregrounds _Common Measure_, _Indemnity of Dawn_, Hull Four, Luce, Samira, Pal, Sable, Rhyne, Meera, Mara, Khraa, Kavi, and the displayed Huginn role only when needed. Mira and Dev may be introduced by stable operational role before name. The worker delegates, neutral witness, claimant classes, and rescued staff remain role-first unless earlier scenes have earned personal recall.

Aetheria/Brainstorming/Stories/Pirate Metagame Novella/09 Scene Engineering/Simulation Candidate Notes.md

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+# Simulation Candidate Notes
+
+These notes are noncanonical implementation prompts discovered during scene engineering. They do not block drafting.
+
+| Candidate | Narrative use | Consumed state | Missing simulation state | Conservation and counterplay | Observable cues | Sensitivity / status / promotion trigger |
+| --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- |
+| Recovery-neighborhood consequence volume | Enemy attacks the shared door and service plant rather than defeating every recoverable drone | Drone fuel, heat, ammunition; throat state; hot parking; parent geometry | Spatial coupling between recovery queue and vulnerable service volumes | Threat must infer return fan and close while doors are active; parent may scatter, abandon drones, close throat, or change recovery site | Return vectors, door state, coolant demand, parent maneuvers | Robust at coarse level; **Provisional**; promote because it recurs, changes loadouts, and must transfer observed/offscreen |
+| Worker-held mechanical safing | Local worker keeps an inspection state open after remote closure command | Worker presence, mechanism state, time, coercion risk | Human/local authority as actuator distinct from network control | Worker may refuse, be removed, or close access; remote systems regain control after bounded delay | Open panels, local acknowledgements, slower closure | **Provisional**; promote if players can solicit or counter local cooperation |
+| Dual-purpose Remora override isolation | One attachment isolates remote suppression while workers hold custody manually | Terminal thrust, attachment access, payload duration, worker labor | Attachment-region reachability, isolation duration, local/manual custody state | Maintenance envelope constrains target; PDC, closure, arbitrary burn, or worker refusal counter it | Service token, approach resolution, attachment alarm, lost override | **Provisional**; promote because AI/player invocation and offscreen transfer matter |
+| Role migration on common small hulls | Relay carriers become terminal munition delivery and later communication assets | Cradle mass, heat, impulse, link bandwidth, carried payload | Runtime capability activation and role confidence separate from hull category | Each role consumes physical components; destruction removes all bundled capabilities | Emission, trajectory, deployed payload, link behavior | **Established** as doctrine principle, implementation incomplete; promote with small-hull component system |
+| Protected reserve with distributed release authority | Rescue shepherd remains available because designation, activation, geometry, and maneuver have separate owners | Hull slot, fuel, time, cognition, opportunity cost | Multi-owner authorization and protected-resource floor | Can be reassigned only through named authority path; damage or geometry may still defeat rescue | Reserve status, activation command, assigned corridor | **Provisional**; promote because deliberate player/AI doctrine and social authority affect outcome |
+| Continuity-freeze commit | Tactical objective is preserving quorum until remote alteration and asset flight become irreversibly frozen | People, records, escrow key, communication paths, procedure owner, time | Noncombat objective graph with revocable participants and irreversible commit | Participants can withdraw before commit; loss of required roles/paths collapses attempt; combat cannot adjudicate later claims | Witness confirmations, path loss, worker vote, commit receipt | **Provisional**; likely strategic-layer mechanic; promote if economic warfare and offscreen transfer use it |
+| Architecture-specific adversarial cognition | Shaped emissions make a real solution semantically unreliable for a known cognition lineage | Attacker evidence, waveform/thermal budget, defender cognition load, time | Architecture provenance, targeted bias state, partition action, semantic confidence | Generic noise cannot produce precise bias; partition, independent sensors, early withdrawal, or architecture diversity counter it | Contradictory histories, confidence divergence, known provenance | **Provisional**; promote because recurring AI/player counterplay and cognition balance require numerical boundaries |
+| Maintenance-safe acceleration envelope | Worker-opened state limits target maneuver enough for terminal selection among access regions | Target acceleration authority, open mechanism, Remora divert | Contextual maneuver envelope tied to maintenance state | Target may close access, sacrifice mechanism, or accelerate and abort procedure; Remora cannot match arbitrary burn | Declared maintenance state, closure attempt, acceleration limit | **Provisional**; promote with terminal maneuver and subsystem-access simulation |
+
+## Drafting Rule
+
+A scene may use any candidate above when conservation, era, partial knowledge, finite cognition, and materially available counterplay make the result robust. Exact thresholds remain contested and may not carry a numerical knife-edge outcome.

Aetheria/Brainstorming/Stories/Pirate Metagame Novella/09 Scene Engineering/Skeptical Review Report.md

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+# Skeptical Review Report
+
+Four independent reviewers examined the ninety scene cards from audience, continuity/tactics, character/social-agency, and prose/rhythm perspectives. Reviewers proposed changes only; the coordinator adjudicated canonical artifacts.
+
+## Accepted Blocking Repairs
+
+- The final causal spine is now: keep one communication path alive while the workers finish choosing. Procedure confirms a victory the reader already understands.
+- Mira Sol remains role-first in the climax to avoid late-name collision with Meera Tann.
+- Aftermath chapters have immediate human wants: record truth before departure, secure treatment before custody changes, make payroll tonight, protect a specific juvenile/source, and leave before the window closes.
+- Pal begins separating from ship tasks before Chapter 24 and genuinely enjoys an attractive alternative life.
+- Luce's breakdown remains visible through concrete behavior observed after Hull One, during Hull Three custody, and at Pal's departure.
+- Bureaucratic irony is restricted by voice; scene drafts receive strict aphorism, dialogue, sensory, and chapter-exit restraints.
+- Campaign VI presents two incompatible visible facts before terminology.
+
+## Continuity And Tactical Repairs
+
+- Mara stops at the service threshold; Kavi's evidence arrives before entry and causes the refusal to cross.
+- The first Courtesy victory launches eight drones, not the complete sixteen-hull wing.
+- Campaign I retains Suri Dax's wage/title decision surface.
+- Hull One's robust chain includes a second committed loiterer after Jo's correct shot jams the recovery shutter and opens service runs.
+- Luce authorizes sacrificing his damaged Courtesy, Jo owns release and solution, and Samira owns maneuver and evacuation.
+- Hull Three's clean capture follows an explicit eight-month build and four months of trials.
+- Rruk/Sable cognition partition occurs before final approach data arrives.
+- Rhyne transmits an authenticated title-vault manifest; Samira infers intent from geometry rather than knowing contents magically.
+
+## Character And Social Repairs
+
+- Sable's injury does not redeem them. Resentment, violated architectural preference, bodily authority, and fear of withdrawal without consensus remain live.
+- Meera's veto costs quiet advantage and changes trust toward Samira's institution, not Luce.
+- Ikk-rr, Vek, and Tlak impose task-specific conditions that narrow the final plan.
+- Two worker delegates take incompatible actions before reaching revocable convergence.
+- Mara and Khraa's final delta is asymmetric; operational trust rises while representative authority and forgiveness remain denied.
+- Mara and Sable must use each other's disliked isolation methods during final ingress.
+- Two dependant responses enter the aftermath without becoming remote accounting or Luce-centered choices.
+
+## Qualified Or Rejected Proposals
+
+- Chapter 9 remains a short chapter rather than merging into Chapter 10. Its job is social dread and false closure, while Chapter 10 begins consequence immediately.
+- The twenty-seven-chapter architecture remains intact.
+- Sideband procedure retains exact quorum and authority detail, but manuscript exposure is reduced rather than deleting causally necessary state.
+
+## Acceptance
+
+The repaired cards satisfy the governing question: a reader can reconstruct why an outcome occurred from prior facts, while another competent opponent could have produced a different result. Drafting remains responsible for enforcing the restraint rules rather than copying each card's polished Work sentence into prose.

Aetheria/Brainstorming/Stories/Pirate Metagame Novella/Decision Log.md

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 | D-074 | Value the immediate final continuity event at 28.9m SU cash-equivalent net of overlap and direct replenishment. | Accepted | The protected coalition clears campaign losses without counting contested later rights or restoring Luce's fortune. |
 | D-075 | Earn final ingress through worker-issued authority and bounded maintenance geometry. | Accepted | Signature shaping obscures capability assignment but cannot counterfeit unlimited authorization or impulse. |
 | D-076 | Make Campaign VI's manuscript account substantially simpler than its tactical sideband. | Accepted | Reader comprehension and live disagreement matter more than displaying the full causal model. |
+| D-077 | Govern drafting through ninety scene cards that each change at least two tracked dimensions. | Accepted | Scene-level causality prevents architecture from becoming summary while preserving room for prose invention. |
+| D-078 | Reduce the final reader-facing causal spine to one surviving communication path and workers finishing their choice. | Accepted | Readers should understand victory before receiving procedural terminology. |
+| D-079 | Begin Pal's separation from ship labor before the sanctuary chapter. | Accepted | A credible alternative life requires preparation and relinquishment, not departure and return compressed into one contractual event. |
+| D-080 | Restrict polished thematic lines to at most one per scene and leave authority implicit in at least one scene per chapter. | Accepted | The manuscript must sound like different people living under pressure rather than one institutional intelligence routing decisions. |
+| D-081 | Preserve the second loiterer in Hull One's destruction chain. | Accepted | The loss must follow seeded redundancy rather than a lucky fragment cascade. |
+| D-082 | Make Suri Dax's wage/title choice part of the first Courtesy victory. | Accepted | Target agency and coercive residue must be visible before the crew calls a prize clean. |
 
 ## Supersession Rule
 

Aetheria/Brainstorming/Stories/Pirate Metagame Novella/Scene Cards.md

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+# Scene Cards
+
+These cards are the authoritative drafting plan for the novella. They preserve scene causality without dictating finished prose. Every scene changes at least two dimensions among material state, knowledge, authority, relationship, belief, bodily condition, economics, reputation, and tactical geometry.
+
+Fields:
+
+- **Drive:** viewpoint objective and immediate conflict.
+- **Boundary:** what the viewpoint knows, believes, and must not know.
+- **Body:** tactical or sensory conditions and the maximum reader-facing clocks.
+- **Work:** comedy mechanism and thematic labor.
+- **Delta:** changed state at exit.
+- **Obligation:** setup, payoff, or simulation-seam note carried forward.
+
+## Movement I: Beautiful Answers
+
+### Chapter 1: The Credential
+
+#### 1.1 Regatta Courtesy
+
+- **POV:** Luce.
+- **Drive:** Win the Orsino-sponsored regatta beautifully enough that competence will feel like moral substance; Pal and the race officials keep asking him to conserve cooling margin.
+- **Boundary:** Luce knows regatta systems and family etiquette. He cannot know the Serrat household or the automatic claim consequences.
+- **Body:** Acceleration couches, polished sponsor traffic, rising sink load. One clock: cooling reserve.
+- **Work:** Luce has commissioned emergency attire appropriate to being photographed after a rescue he does not expect to perform. Status preparation becomes practical embarrassment.
+- **Delta:** He gives up his winning line to investigate _Mild Exception_; race position and self-image both change.
+- **Obligation:** Seed Pal's habit of anticipating Luce's needs and Luce's conviction that preparation can make virtue reproducible.
+
+#### 1.2 Six People
+
+- **POV:** Luce.
+- **Drive:** Keep six strangers alive while race control tells him the rescue craft is already assigned; the assigned response will arrive after their cooling margin expires.
+- **Boundary:** He has direct telemetry and Pal's estimates, not the cause of the casualty or the survivors' private choices.
+- **Body:** Transfer under residual spin, an overheating cabin, one improvised thermal connection. One clock: people versus cooling.
+- **Work:** Callisto's post-shootdown etiquette makes waiting to classify the emergency institutionally correct and physically absurd.
+- **Delta:** All six transfer alive; Luce loses the regatta and gains an authenticated rescue event.
+- **Obligation:** Life-over-property invariant precedes piracy and crew loyalty.
+
+#### 1.3 Automatic Assistance
+
+- **POV:** Luce.
+- **Drive:** Use his family credential to clear medical priority; the same credential opens an automatic recovery claim against Serrat's ship and household.
+- **Boundary:** Luce sees the notice and Ilyana Serrat's reaction. He does not yet understand the full family-office machinery.
+- **Body:** Quiet dock corridor, borrowed blanket, racing suit no longer comic enough to protect him.
+- **Work:** A rescue form congratulates him while itemizing what the rescued people now owe.
+- **Delta:** Serrat's gratitude becomes guarded hostility; Luce's pride becomes moral revulsion and a badly aimed desire to leave his caste.
+- **Obligation:** Seed claims portfolio and the error that adventure can cure administered complicity.
+
+### Chapter 2: Articles
+
+#### 2.1 The Pirate Proposal
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Determine whether Luce is asking for company, service, or property deployment when he announces piracy over breakfast.
+- **Boundary:** Pal knows every earlier hobby and the fixture registration. They cannot know Samira's eventual terms.
+- **Body:** Domestic shell, family apartment, tiny anticipatory acts: warmed cup, cleared route, unanswered schedule prompt. No combat clock.
+- **Work:** Luce has prepared a presentation for his own butler about escaping inherited hierarchy.
+- **Delta:** Pal refuses presumed consent and requires independent custody language; affection and authority separate for the first time on page.
+- **Obligation:** Show conditioning before naming it. Preserve mixed affection.
+
+#### 2.2 Fixture
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Inspect the proposed portable shell and ship cradle; legal counsel explains that upgrading Pal may strengthen the family's property claim.
+- **Boundary:** Pal knows shell continuity and legal text, not whether Luce will choose the cheaper coercive path.
+- **Body:** Test lift of the 118-kilogram shell, limited local cooling, family cryptography embedded in new hardware.
+- **Work:** The only component certified as an antique is the person who remembers everyone buying antiques.
+- **Delta:** Luce authorizes the expensive removable cradle and independent extraction directive; Pal agrees only to negotiate participation.
+- **Obligation:** Establish no hard obedience, physical extraction, and legal attack surface.
+
+#### 2.3 Command Is A Verb
+
+- **POV:** Samira.
+- **Drive:** Decide whether Luce's money can support an institution whose captain may be challenged; Luce keeps offering generous benefits where she asks for authority.
+- **Boundary:** Samira knows the rescue record, public family history, and offer. Pal's private motives remain sealed.
+- **Body:** Contract table, nine principal chairs, Twelvefold represented by two empty perches pending consent.
+- **Work:** Luce's magnificent employment package repeatedly fails the simpler test of who can say no during a burn.
+- **Delta:** Samira obtains abort authority, distributed fire/survival ownership, funded wages and remittances, and a witnessed captain-removal path. She signs.
+- **Obligation:** Every later refusal must use these articles rather than Luce's grace.
+
+### Chapter 3: A Larger House
+
+#### 3.1 Cradle Contact
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Enter _The Sum of Our Parts_ without letting the ship-scale embodiment erase the portable self.
+- **Boundary:** Pal knows commissioning tests and opaque crew identifiers, not private Corvid names or hidden caches.
+- **Body:** Sensors arrive as rooms, temperature, door pressure, and thirty-five biological bodies. Primary concept: embodiment; secondary: thermal port.
+- **Work:** Pal discovers Luce ordered a dining table acceleration-rated far beyond any meal's reasonable ambition. They were. He had checked.
+- **Delta:** Pal gains ship-scale body and records an explicit extraction baseline; wonder and custody anxiety rise together.
+- **Obligation:** Establish domestic sensing and avoid telemetry census.
+
+#### 3.2 The Door
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Run drone-deck acceptance while Dena Vey tests whether automation can be stopped by a human technician.
+- **Boundary:** Pal sees rack geometry and Dena's authority request. They do not yet infer the eventual attack.
+- **Body:** Four recovery throats, shared hot parking, coolant manifold, service rails. One reader sentence: reusable things need a finite door.
+- **Work:** Premium panels hide every ugly dependency until Dena opens them and the commissioned elegance becomes a queue.
+- **Delta:** Dena's deck-halt command is made local and physical; Pal identifies concentrated service but treats it as an operational fact.
+- **Obligation:** Seed the recovery neighborhood without ominous narration.
+
+#### 3.3 Responsive Systems
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Observe Luce rehearsing doctrine with the ship as if responsiveness itself proves freedom from bottlenecks.
+- **Boundary:** Pal recognizes the childhood pattern; the crew sees only preparation.
+- **Body:** Quiet habitation drum, model contacts moving over the table, Pal adjusting light before Luce asks.
+- **Work:** Pal's clocks for Luce's hobbies return in domestic scale.
+- **Delta:** Pal privately classifies piracy as another responsive-system obsession but chooses not to puncture Luce's first serious work.
+- **Obligation:** Pay off in Chapters 9 and 19 when Luce begins recognizing the pattern.
+
+### Chapter 4: Reversible Superiority
+
+#### 4.1 A Good Idea Receives Employees
+
+- **POV:** Luce.
+- **Drive:** Win professional assent for offensive recoverable PDC drones; every specialist improves the doctrine in a way that makes ownership less singular.
+- **Boundary:** Luce knows the published post-Callisto meta and tactical coaching. He does not see recovery topology as the missing professional concern.
+- **Body:** Council model, unresolved objects, fuel and service reserves. Primary clock: track; secondary: recovery reserve.
+- **Work:** Luce has named the doctrine before the people who must make it work have agreed it exists.
+- **Delta:** Samira limits commitment, Dena sets return reserves, Sable partitions targets, Jo keeps destructive fallback. The plan becomes credible.
+- **Obligation:** Preserve “I know what the scheduler does. I asked what the ship does.”
+
+#### 4.2 Courtesies
+
+- **POV:** Luce.
+- **Drive:** Force an ambiguous screen to reveal itself without spending premium missiles.
+- **Boundary:** He receives Sable/Ilya confidence and visible emissions, not target interiority.
+- **Body:** One eight-drone flight with the second eight retained aboard, sparse contacts, passive parent. Track clock only until defensive fire reveals geometry.
+- **Work:** “Courtesy” is both elegant branding and a threat delivered before identity resolves.
+- **Delta:** Drones kill spotters and pin relays; target defensive response reveals parent geometry. Luce's thesis earns its first real result without spending the whole wing.
+- **Obligation:** Make the success tactically impressive, not lucky.
+
+#### 4.3 Surrender Geometry
+
+- **POV:** Luce.
+- **Drive:** Convert reveal into surrender rather than destruction while target deck lead Suri Dax decides whether to sabotage title, preserve wage authentication, or force a destructive capture.
+- **Boundary:** Luce knows target movement and own Remora/capture options, not target private panic.
+- **Body:** Courtesy screen, modest capture ballistics, Remora threat held visible rather than launched.
+- **Work:** The expensive weapon works by being credibly returnable, and Luce cannot stop looking pleased when professionals use it better than his presentation.
+- **Delta:** Dax preserves wage authentication and sabotages Luce's easier title path before accepting Tess's narrower surrender terms. First prize is low-damage but coercive and less ownable; crew grants Luce tactical seriousness without granting command infallibility.
+- **Obligation:** Misleading validation: cognition appears to make physical bottlenecks manageable.
+
+### Chapter 5: The Refundable War
+
+#### 5.1 Returns
+
+- **POV:** Luce.
+- **Drive:** Repeat the doctrine against a denser heterogeneous screen; returning Courtesies arrive hotter, emptier, and closer together than planned.
+- **Boundary:** Luce sees queue summaries but not Dena's tendon strain or household calculation until she speaks.
+- **Body:** Recovery fan, finite throats, service queue. Primary clock: return; secondary: labor.
+- **Work:** A dashboard labels every drone “recoverable” while Deck has nowhere to put them.
+- **Delta:** Several small wins accumulate, but return geometry exposes parent direction and Deck begins violating ordinary safety spacing.
+- **Obligation:** No physical preview of Hull One destruction; this loss is labor coercion.
+
+#### 5.2 Deck Closed
+
+- **POV:** Luce.
+- **Drive:** Preserve the capture opportunity after Dena closes the deck; Sable requests one narrowly justified exception.
+- **Boundary:** Luce knows the tactical value and Dena's stated limits. He cannot convert her refusal into mere caution.
+- **Body:** Hot drones outside, injured technician inside, coolant surge unavailable.
+- **Work:** Jo offers to “convert inventory into decisions” by abandoning recoverability; Dena asks who cools the decisions afterward.
+- **Delta:** Luce refuses to overrule Deck and releases drones to expend or scatter. Dena's authority becomes real; Sable's confidence in captain control falls while trust in the articles rises.
+- **Obligation:** Technical explanation through contested action.
+
+#### 5.3 Refund Denied
+
+- **POV:** Luce.
+- **Drive:** Decide whether to destroy the target after losing the recoverable advantage.
+- **Boundary:** He knows Jo can still win destructively and Tess's capture estimate; he does not know the target's broader social state.
+- **Body:** Cooling recovery, depleted drone inventory, target withdrawing.
+- **Work:** The doctrine's first invoice arrives while Luce is still trying to narrate the victory.
+- **Delta:** Luce abandons objective rather than spend crew or target lives for face value; two Courtesies are destroyed, six become depot-bound, and staggered repair lasts ten weeks. Material loss exceeds prize gain. He learns “more service reserve,” not “recovery is a topology.”
+- **Obligation:** First failure wins something, costs more, changes labor and captain trust while conserving the accepted inventory residue.
+
+### Chapter 6: Service Interval
+
+#### 6.1 The Table At Work
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Host dinner during the tenth week of repair while everyone pretends the gathering is not a maintenance conference.
+- **Boundary:** Pal knows ship queues and public remittance messages, not every private dependant fear.
+- **Body:** Habitation spin, tendon brace, mugs held by the table's absurd restraints. No tactical clock.
+- **Work:** The status table becomes useful because nothing slides when Dena demonstrates a seized wrist.
+- **Delta:** Three support workers become socially familiar; Luce's praise is received as workload evidence rather than affection.
+- **Obligation:** Familiarize Dena, Rin, and Soren before Hull One loss.
+
+#### 6.2 Cash Cannot Accelerate A Tendon
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Help Luce solve a schedule problem he cannot purchase away.
+- **Boundary:** Pal knows offers and maintenance reality; Dena's reason to stay is hers.
+- **Body:** Repair plans, medical limits, household remittance deadline.
+- **Work:** Luce keeps adding money to a calendar as if numbers can make tissue heal faster.
+- **Delta:** Dena chooses a slower return with full injury pay; Tess reallocates prize money; Luce accepts lost time and gains a small measure of wage trust.
+- **Obligation:** Care/maintenance counter-theme; no montage.
+
+#### 6.3 Ordinary Ownership
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Notice crew making the ship theirs without asking Luce or Pal.
+- **Boundary:** Pal observes objects and routines, not all motives.
+- **Body:** Corvid perch moved, Rin's independent atmosphere gauge, Soren's feed labels, one scratched table edge.
+- **Work:** The ship improves aesthetically by becoming less commissioned.
+- **Delta:** Home shifts from purchased object to worked institution; Pal withholds a maintenance correction long enough for someone else to own it.
+- **Obligation:** Seed voluntary local control in Hull Four.
+
+### Chapter 7: Prior Absence
+
+#### 7.1 Be Nothing
+
+- **POV:** Samira.
+- **Drive:** Hold Deep Quiet long enough to intercept Yun Tal's scheduled cargo movement.
+- **Boundary:** Samira knows maneuver, heat, atmosphere, and stale tracks; Yun's ordinary milestones are inferred only from observed schedule.
+- **Body:** Cold coast, sealed heat, rising carbon dioxide, uncertain contact. Primary clock: heat; secondary: information decay.
+- **Work:** Luce's doctrine name implies absence while every compartment fills with the physical cost of pretending not to exist.
+- **Delta:** They gain favorable geometry but lose confidence about which trace is the target.
+- **Obligation:** Quiet is valid, not foolish.
+
+#### 7.2 Delivery Window
+
+- **POV:** Samira.
+- **Drive:** Decide whether to reveal before the target's mundane route choice makes interception impossible.
+- **Boundary:** She knows the abort margin has arrived before Luce recognizes it; she cannot know Yun's thoughts.
+- **Body:** Headaches, warm air, limited radiator deployment, cargo tugs continuing ordinary work.
+- **Work:** The target defeats piracy by meeting a delivery milestone with crushing professionalism.
+- **Delta:** Samira invokes autonomous abort; Luce objects too late to own the decision. They reveal and leave empty-handed.
+- **Obligation:** Samira pays public reputation cost and attachment begins through exercised authority.
+
+#### 7.3 The Review
+
+- **POV:** Samira.
+- **Drive:** Prevent Luce from recasting the abort as a jointly discovered refinement.
+- **Boundary:** She knows what she said and when; she does not know his private shame.
+- **Body:** Cooler ship, ugly headache, review transcript.
+- **Work:** The record has timestamps, an enemy of gracious retrospective consensus.
+- **Delta:** Luce signs Samira's account without amendment. His tactical confidence survives; his ownership of refusal decreases.
+- **Obligation:** Later rescue and withdrawal calls rely on timestamped authority.
+
+### Chapter 8: The Courtesy of an Open Door
+
+#### 8.1 Patient Hands
+
+- **POV:** Mara Kest.
+- **Drive:** Reach the service-route threshold after Remorae open safing and internal data access without damaging the prize.
+- **Boundary:** Mara knows route, threat, and her own custody assumptions. Kavi's passenger coupling is unknown.
+- **Body:** Quiet hull, doors responding, life-support graph following captured controls. One concept: dependency coupling.
+- **Work:** “Non-destructive” means every system still works well enough to implicate its captor.
+- **Delta:** Mara reaches but does not cross the engineering threshold; remote access appears complete and she treats technical access as authority over what lies beyond.
+- **Obligation:** Remorae preserve prizes and can target many subsystems.
+
+#### 8.2 Kavi's Door
+
+- **POV:** Mara Kest.
+- **Drive:** Decide whether to cross and secure engineer Kavi Issen; before entry, Kavi demonstrates that passenger life support depends on the same safing path.
+- **Boundary:** Mara sees evidence in real time. She cannot know whether Kavi will later testify for or against her.
+- **Body:** One opened door, passengers behind it, Remora control coupled to air and medicine.
+- **Work:** Mara's preferred clean categories collapse in front of a literal threshold.
+- **Delta:** Mara refuses the crossing, protects Kavi from a boarder who calls them hardware-adjacent, and attempts protective custody Kavi refuses; Jo safes destructive payloads.
+- **Obligation:** Accurate class grievance and prejudice coexist; no redemption applause.
+
+#### 8.3 No Prize
+
+- **POV:** Mara Kest.
+- **Drive:** Salvage some value from a technically successful attachment and intrusion after Tess rules the prize legally and morally unusable.
+- **Boundary:** Mara knows Kavi's refusal and Tess's ruling, not future publication.
+- **Body:** Intact machinery, live passengers, Remora waiting for commands.
+- **Work:** Tess produces several mutually exclusive definitions of “intact,” all binding on someone.
+- **Delta:** Luce orders withdrawal and releases control. Kavi remains with target and preserves evidence of both coercion and restraint; Mara loses possession but changes conduct.
+- **Obligation:** Movement ends with institution stronger, economics worse, and tactical thesis overcorrecting toward known bottlenecks.
+
+## Movement II: Things That Cannot Be Replaced
+
+### Chapter 9: The Known Bottleneck
+
+#### 9.1 Corrective Action
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Observe the postmortem council convert every earlier Courtesy failure into new reserves, wider return spacing, and professional procedure.
+- **Boundary:** Pal knows the recovery plant and Luce's pattern. Rhyne's counter remains unknown.
+- **Body:** Model fan, revised fuel floors, four unchanged throats. One concept: concentration.
+- **Work:** The doctrine survives by receiving so many corrections that Luce can call it mature.
+- **Delta:** Crew confidence returns for materially sound reasons; Pal's dread rises because the physical door remains the same door.
+- **Obligation:** Keep short and social. Do not replay Chapter 5.
+
+#### 9.2 Except As A Door
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Ask whether a threat can attack the recovery neighborhood rather than the drones; experts answer every part except the embodied one.
+- **Boundary:** Pal has no hidden enemy trace and cannot predict exact catastrophe.
+- **Body:** Pal opens a panel, checks the shared manifold, closes it after three seconds.
+- **Work:** A complex risk review becomes politically vulnerable to one ordinary noun.
+- **Delta:** Samira adds an evacuation readiness condition; Luce hears “known risk with mitigation,” while Pal recognizes obsession recurrence.
+- **Obligation:** The warning must be fair but not prophetic.
+
+### Chapter 10: The Open Mouth
+
+#### 10.1 Friendly Return
+
+- **POV:** Samira.
+- **Drive:** Recover damaged Courtesies while maintaining pursuit pressure; one drone cannot hold its assigned lane.
+- **Boundary:** Samira sees local tracks and Ilya's confidence. She does not know which unresolved object is terminal.
+- **Body:** Return fan, one wounded friendly, several patient contacts. Primary clock: recovery; secondary: terminal closure.
+- **Work:** The recovery procedures work exactly as written and therefore make everyone arrive at the same place.
+- **Delta:** Dena opens a damaged-recovery throat; parent geometry becomes easier to infer.
+- **Obligation:** Competence causes exposure without becoming stupidity.
+
+#### 10.2 Consequence Volume
+
+- **POV:** Samira.
+- **Drive:** Separate the damaged friendly from a newly accelerating threat before both enter the service neighborhood.
+- **Boundary:** Samira knows an attack exists before its exact chassis or intent resolves.
+- **Body:** Occluded terminal path, jammed throat, low-fuel drone, inhabited service volumes behind it.
+- **Work:** Everyone has an accurate name for the problem except one that makes it smaller.
+- **Delta:** Samira declares probable hull loss and orders evacuation readiness while Luce still seeks a recoverable tactical solution.
+- **Obligation:** Reader can reconstruct: enemy attacks the door, not every drone.
+
+#### 10.3 The Correct Shot
+
+- **POV:** Samira.
+- **Drive:** Declare that recovery is no longer viable and convert readiness into evacuation command while Luce decides whether to sacrifice his damaged Courtesy; delay means direct impact.
+- **Boundary:** She knows firing geometry, not the fire pattern that fragments will produce inside.
+- **Body:** One material shot, one converging threat, recovery throat open. Terminal clock only.
+- **Work:** Jo's solution is right and still cannot make the neighborhood a good place to be hit.
+- **Delta:** Luce authorizes sacrifice; Jo owns release and solution. The first threat breaks, debris jams the shutter and opens propellant transfer, and a second already-committed loiterer resolves from another bearing inside defended geometry.
+- **Obligation:** Jo's correctness remains intact. Samira owns evacuation and maneuver; Luce owns sacrificing his asset.
+
+### Chapter 11: All Persons Clear
+
+#### 11.1 Ship Fire
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Contain the second loiterer's strike as it ignites hot-parking stores in the service neighborhood while maintaining routes for crew.
+- **Boundary:** Pal experiences compartment failure directly but cannot see through severed relays.
+- **Body:** Propellant, ammunition, coolant, doors, pressure. Primary clock: fire propagation; secondary: one evacuation route.
+- **Work:** The ship's most elegant shared service systems share the emergency too.
+- **Delta:** Hot-parking propellant and ammunition ignite through the opened service runs; Pal loses sensor and motor regions; Dena is trapped beyond a hot transfer corridor; whole-hull control fragments.
+- **Obligation:** Ship embodiment must be visceral, not a dashboard.
+
+#### 11.2 Worker Before Core
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Keep control long enough to extract Dena while Luce orders Pal's shell released first.
+- **Boundary:** Pal knows Dena's route and own thermal state; Luce cannot feel the ship body.
+- **Body:** Manual extraction time, closing fire door, four-person carry requirement.
+- **Work:** The articles become useful by making the captain wrong in a legally uncomplicated way.
+- **Delta:** Edda prioritizes Dena under biological urgency; Luce obeys. Dena survives; Pal's extraction becomes harder and memory loss begins.
+- **Obligation:** Luce's invariant includes Pal but does not grant Pal priority over living workers.
+
+#### 11.3 Yield
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Decide which hull-local memories and controls to release so the shell can leave before cradle distortion becomes fatal.
+- **Boundary:** Pal cannot know what lost working memory will feel like afterward.
+- **Body:** Cradle uncoupling, shrinking wireless body, the table and domestic rooms going silent.
+- **Work:** Luce tries to help carry a 118-kilogram shell under acceleration and becomes physically redundant.
+- **Delta:** Pal consents to extraction and loses recent embodied memory; Luce relinquishes command usefulness; all thirty-five biological people and Pal clear.
+- **Obligation:** “All persons” includes Pal without treating core as cargo. Pal returns after a brief absence to find Luce still holding a carry handle he no longer needs to hold; Pal's observation changes how the reader understands Luce's composure.
+
+#### 11.4 Scuttle
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Confirm no person remains and authorize destruction of the continuing fire risk.
+- **Boundary:** Pal has bounded external senses and cannot inhabit the ship again.
+- **Body:** Lifeboat cooling, distant visible burn, one final authenticated command.
+- **Work:** The acceleration-rated table remains perfectly secured until it ceases to exist.
+- **Delta:** Hull One is deliberately scuttled; first embodiment ends; crew trust in rescue rises while grief and insolvency begin.
+- **Obligation:** Do not make the loss beautiful enough to erase its practical violence.
+
+### Chapter 12: Terms of Rescue
+
+#### 12.1 Testimony
+
+- **POV:** Samira.
+- **Drive:** Complete the rescue certificate without letting Halcyon rewrite the evacuation as pirate negligence alone.
+- **Boundary:** She knows command timestamps and survivor state, not Rhyne's private threshold.
+- **Body:** Rescue berth, smoke smell in clean fabric, one certificate moving between hands.
+- **Work:** The form allows “all persons recovered” and “total asset loss” in adjacent boxes with different font sizes.
+- **Delta:** Samira signs a record that protects crew conduct and admits causal failure; reputation becomes both credit and evidence.
+- **Obligation:** Governing transaction is the certificate.
+
+#### 12.2 Clearance
+
+- **POV:** Ysabet Rhyne.
+- **Drive:** Decide whether to accept the scuttle and rescue account while Halcyon wants attribution leverage.
+- **Boundary:** Rhyne has observations and certificate, not pirate private arguments.
+- **Body:** Exterior wreck track, medical status, local legal authority.
+- **Work:** Pirate rescue ethics arrive in a format Halcyon can invoice.
+- **Delta:** Rhyne certifies survival and necessary scuttle, preserving her own rescue threshold while opening a hazard claim.
+- **Obligation:** Reveal competent adversary only after outcome.
+
+#### 12.3 Collateral
+
+- **POV:** Tess Valez.
+- **Drive:** Turn the certificate into enough credit for wages, medicine, and any replacement hull.
+- **Boundary:** Tess knows liens and family advance terms, not Pal's private grief.
+- **Body:** Same document now attached to casualty bonds, worker departures, and Pal fixture claims.
+- **Work:** Moral achievement improves creditworthiness just enough to collateralize the next disaster.
+- **Delta:** Several workers leave; family office offers constrained advance; bespoke replacement becomes impossible.
+- **Obligation:** Care and custody arrive together. Compress two incompatible dependant responses into the work: one household refuses deferred exposure; another supports rescue work while refusing continued piracy. Neither message routes through Luce.
+
+### Chapter 13: A Reasonable Doubt
+
+#### 13.1 Vale Condition
+
+- **POV:** Mara Kest.
+- **Drive:** Accept an emergency used hull from Oss Vale while enforcing the articles; Vale excludes Corvid access to private systems.
+- **Boundary:** Mara knows the supplier condition and her own contacts, not Twelvefold cache locations.
+- **Body:** Crowded courier hull, exposed machinery, no decorative privacy.
+- **Work:** Mara's reactionary contacts secure a hull whose reactionary contract she must help dismantle.
+- **Delta:** Luce pays delay and inspection cost; Mara backs the Twelvefold's access right without ideological conversion.
+- **Obligation:** Prejudice has observable cost and changed conduct.
+
+#### 13.2 Inspection
+
+- **POV:** Mara Kest.
+- **Drive:** Secure the ship while twelve indistinguishable contractors inspect it on terms that exclude her from their cache volumes.
+- **Boundary:** Mara tracks bodies through rescue IDs but cannot map true names or private cache content.
+- **Body:** Zero-g passages, mismatched doors, distributed local controls.
+- **Work:** Human face blindness makes Mara's beloved headcount procedure produce several mutually correct totals.
+- **Delta:** Twelvefold accepts hull with bounded private routes; Mara yields inspection ownership and gains operational confidence without personal comfort.
+- **Obligation:** Identity play never breaks authoritative sideband.
+
+#### 13.3 Ugly Relief
+
+- **POV:** Mara Kest.
+- **Drive:** Move the crew and portable Pal into a ship everyone dislikes.
+- **Boundary:** Mara sees Pal's physical discomfort only when expressed.
+- **Body:** No premium cradle bandwidth, loud pumps, good compartment isolation.
+- **Work:** Every bad finish is easy to open, service, and distrust.
+- **Delta:** Crew status falls; maintenance access improves; Pal establishes new bounded body; domestic irritation breaks grief's uniformity.
+- **Obligation:** Ordinary life before next tactical success.
+
+### Chapter 14: The Last Plausible Ship
+
+#### 14.1 Borrowed History
+
+- **POV:** Sable.
+- **Drive:** Shape Hull Two's thermal history to resemble a plausible damaged courier inside its actual envelope.
+- **Boundary:** Sable knows emitted history and current observations, not Olan's unshared baseline archive.
+- **Body:** Detachable thermal media, ugly sink rails, aspect changes. Primary concept: mask history; secondary: aspect.
+- **Work:** The mismatched repair record is finally premium in the only market that values inconsistency.
+- **Delta:** Target classifies Hull Two into the intended family; Sable's trust in authored perception rises.
+- **Obligation:** Cold-Wake shaping remains bounded and spends heat.
+
+#### 14.2 Beautiful Capture
+
+- **POV:** Sable.
+- **Drive:** Maintain the disguise through approach, then use precision information to force surrender.
+- **Boundary:** Sable sees target sensor responses, not all human skepticism aboard it.
+- **Body:** Controlled aspect, Remora threat, modest ballistics.
+- **Work:** Luce's ugly replacement wins by looking exactly as repaired as it is.
+- **Delta:** Capture succeeds with low damage and positive realizable value; Sable publicly assigns solution credit to Jo and Deck rather than Luce's doctrine name, improving one relationship while quietly disappointing Luce.
+- **Obligation:** This is genuinely excellent practice and an irreversible move away from captain-owned authorship.
+
+#### 14.3 Baseline
+
+- **POV:** Sable.
+- **Drive:** Process Olan Tere's visible correction request while preserving the captured sensor data.
+- **Boundary:** Sable knows Olan noticed a discrepancy, not that they retain independent baselines.
+- **Body:** Quiet surrender, target console, one disputed calibration.
+- **Work:** A defeated sensor officer requests ordinary records retention while winners discuss doctrine.
+- **Delta:** Sable dismisses the discrepancy as target damage; Olan preserves evidence outside pirate custody.
+- **Obligation:** Reader knows evidence exists, not Rhyne acquisition.
+
+### Chapter 15: Abandonment
+
+#### 15.1 Every Plausible Route
+
+- **POV:** Samira.
+- **Drive:** Preserve shaped ambiguity while Rhyne illuminates possible thermal histories from several aspects.
+- **Boundary:** Samira knows route pressure and own hull state, not Rhyne's acquired method.
+- **Body:** Forced aspect changes, heat debt, translation-root exposure. Primary clock: reveal; secondary: body-risk.
+- **Work:** The enemy declines to solve the hidden-object puzzle and shakes the box.
+- **Delta:** Hull Two must maneuver; possible identities collapse; Rhyne gains firing confidence without perfect classification.
+- **Obligation:** Counter uses prior available evidence and broad possible-volume attack.
+
+#### 15.2 Tumble
+
+- **POV:** Samira.
+- **Drive:** Arrest distributed damage before thrust, radiation, and structure become mutually unsafe.
+- **Boundary:** She knows local reports and volunteered options; exact salvage probability remains uncertain.
+- **Body:** Uncontrolled tumble, separated controls, rising thermal exposure.
+- **Work:** The ugly ship survives damage so well that it remains dangerously salvageable.
+- **Delta:** All people evacuate; hull remains alive and potentially recoverable; insurer hazard custody approaches.
+- **Obligation:** Distinguish abandonment from Hull One's destruction.
+
+#### 15.3 Volunteers
+
+- **POV:** Samira.
+- **Drive:** Decide whether to permit Ilya and Mara to return for sensor salvage after they volunteer with a plausible plan.
+- **Boundary:** Samira knows Edda's bodily risk estimate and Tess's custody warning. She cannot know future blame.
+- **Body:** Rotating hull, limited suit endurance, rescue craft geometry.
+- **Work:** The salvage plan is competent enough to make refusal socially expensive.
+- **Delta:** Samira states the loss; Luce forbids return under life-over-property rule. Ilya and Mara comply but retain disagreement.
+- **Obligation:** Three materially different available actions: return, remote salvage, abandon.
+
+#### 15.4 Claim Of Cowardice
+
+- **POV:** Samira.
+- **Drive:** Preserve the truthful command record while external channels characterize the intact hull as abandoned.
+- **Boundary:** She knows her judgment and crew state, not full later Halcyon use.
+- **Body:** Lifeboat view of a functioning ship under someone else's custody lights.
+- **Work:** “Intact” returns as an accusation.
+- **Delta:** Hull Two passes into insurer custody; Samira's reputation takes damage; Luce's rescue trust rises unevenly.
+- **Obligation:** Public distortion has later economic consequences.
+
+### Chapter 16: The Benefit of Hindsight
+
+#### 16.1 A Ship Still Doing Things
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Maintain bounded wireless contact with abandoned Hull Two until Halcyon custody severs it.
+- **Boundary:** Pal knows doors, pumps, and unoccupied compartments, not Sable's coming allocation.
+- **Body:** Portable shell, shrinking relay body, ordinary systems continuing without inhabitants.
+- **Work:** The abandoned ship keeps completing tasks nobody needs, an automation success with no audience.
+- **Delta:** Pal deliberately releases remaining controls; second embodiment loss becomes chosen separation rather than destruction.
+- **Obligation:** Emotional aftermath before replacement seduction.
+
+#### 16.2 Allocation Record
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Authenticate what was left behind and what cannot be claimed as inseparable from Pal.
+- **Boundary:** Pal sees legal custody and crew requests, not Rhyne's later evidence path.
+- **Body:** One allocation record passing from loss inventory toward clinic and yard finance.
+- **Work:** The document values Pal's missing cradle interface more confidently than Pal can value the lost sensations.
+- **Delta:** Pal's legal exposure grows; crew treatment receives priority over immediate replacement equipment.
+- **Obligation:** Hard handoff to Sable section via same record.
+
+#### 16.3 Clinic Priority
+
+- **POV:** Sable.
+- **Drive:** Use premium access to secure specialist cognition maintenance without displacing more urgent patients.
+- **Boundary:** Sable knows their dependency and visible clinic queue, not patients' interior lives.
+- **Body:** Finch-derived calibration, scarce wafers, ordinary clinic noise.
+- **Work:** Sable opposes proprietary medicine while carrying a body that can be serviced only by its grammar.
+- **Delta:** Sable accepts delayed/full-risk calibration and funds shared clinic capacity; another patient keeps a slot. The delay requires Jo and Rruk to hold independent confidence gates during Hull Three's first operation. Privilege is constrained, not erased.
+- **Obligation:** Dramatize allocation rather than report it; the compromise materially shapes the following capture.
+
+#### 16.4 Precision
+
+- **POV:** Sable.
+- **Drive:** After an explicit eight-month financing/build interval and four months of trials, demonstrate Hull Three's premium sensing, cognition, and energy weapons in a clean capture while Jo and Rruk hold the independent gates created by Sable's clinic compromise.
+- **Boundary:** Sable knows confidence gates and target geometry, not Halcyon's architecture-specific preparation.
+- **Body:** Power and heat traded for pinpoint energy; Jo's reduced ballistic reserve remains alternative.
+- **Work:** The ship explains itself so elegantly that Luce's terrible name, _The Benefit of Hindsight_, nearly sounds earned.
+- **Delta:** Central cognition produces a genuinely clean victory; Sable's authority and Luce's hope rise; economic gains remain insufficient.
+- **Obligation:** Avoid foreboding wink. Let excellence be pleasurable.
+
+### Chapter 17: Exact Wrongness
+
+#### 17.1 Contradictions
+
+- **POV:** Sable.
+- **Drive:** Maintain a firing solution when the target sits exactly where Sable says yet performs a damage behavior unlike the thing the crew intends to destroy; Rruk identifies a second visible contradiction.
+- **Boundary:** Sable knows the targeting point remains geometrically real; attack provenance and target meaning remain unresolved.
+- **Body:** One exact point, two incompatible visible histories. Primary question: location versus meaning.
+- **Work:** Premium systems give increasingly polished explanations for why their explanations should be trusted.
+- **Delta:** Rruk requests partition; Sable refuses because partition sacrifices the best solution. Cognitive load and interpersonal conflict rise.
+- **Obligation:** Rruk's plain request is to separate observations that should not share a history. Name duplicated ancestry, partition, or provenance only after the reader sees the conflict.
+
+#### 17.2 The Point
+
+- **POV:** Sable.
+- **Drive:** Convince command that the solution is valid before withdrawal margin closes.
+- **Boundary:** Sable knows Jo's round will land there, not what “there” has been made to mean.
+- **Body:** Samira's countdown, Jo's fire-control confirmation, Rruk's threat assessment.
+- **Work:** “Your point is real. I don't know what the point is.”
+- **Delta:** Jo confirms physical accuracy; Samira announces the margin has passed; agreement becomes impossible.
+- **Obligation:** Fire control governs throughput and on-target solution, not classification truth.
+
+#### 17.3 Relinquish
+
+- **POV:** Sable.
+- **Drive:** Retain model control after Luce orders withdrawal; incoming pattern begins targeting externally inferable energy stores.
+- **Boundary:** Sable cannot know exact damage outcome and remains biased by architecture-specific load.
+- **Body:** Capacitors, optical cooling, transfer trunks, mass incoming. Secondary concept: stored energy.
+- **Work:** Crisis dialogue breaks; people repeat commands rather than delivering ideal authority speeches.
+- **Delta:** Sable relinquishes control before accepting diagnosis. Pal quarantines links; Edda disconnects buses; command becomes distributed under live disagreement.
+- **Obligation:** Luce useful through decision, not superior diagnosis.
+
+#### 17.4 Simplicity
+
+- **POV:** Sable.
+- **Drive:** Survive as incoming mass strikes the volumes that store energy for precision fire.
+- **Boundary:** Sensory/cognitive map is impaired; no omniscient damage summary.
+- **Body:** Ballistic impacts, capacitor discharge, proprioceptive collapse. “Not darkness. Worse. Simplicity.”
+- **Work:** Mara protects Sable's stated bodily boundary with dry literalism; impairment is not the joke.
+- **Delta:** Sable is injured; Hull Three survives but requires external cold power. Sable resents Rruk's challenge, experiences Pal's quarantine as a legitimate violation of their preferred architecture, fears Samira's willingness to withdraw without consensus, and does not emerge ideologically cured.
+- **Obligation:** End on action or unsafe energy, not a paired slogan. Edda gains bodily authority while personal ease falls.
+
+### Chapter 18: Rescue Seniority
+
+#### 18.1 Priority Stack
+
+- **POV:** Tess Valez.
+- **Drive:** Preserve crew lives, wages, treatment, and evidence while rescue, fixture, labor, and title claims attach to Hull Three.
+- **Boundary:** Tess knows documents and physical stabilization, not Rhyne's private guilt or Pal's choice.
+- **Body:** One custody transfer instrument, cold-power dependency, competing signatures.
+- **Work:** Everyone agrees rescue comes first and has a different definition of “first.”
+- **Delta:** Tess secures Sable's treatment before cold power or custody can change hands, then protects wage floors by surrendering hull priority; crew loses the ship without another evacuation spectacle.
+- **Obligation:** Immediate human want is treatment, not explaining priority law. The same physical object governs all sections. Tess sees Luce clean the vacated command couch because there is no financial action left for him to take; her estimate of his ruin changes.
+
+#### 18.2 Acquisition
+
+- **POV:** Ysabet Rhyne.
+- **Drive:** Guarantee survival and accept custody while Halcyon directs later stripping and evidence acquisition.
+- **Boundary:** Rhyne now obtains Olan's preserved baselines; Ship Mutiny's token remains unknown.
+- **Body:** Transfer key, rescue tug, Sable's treatment clock already secured.
+- **Work:** Rhyne wins the ship and cannot keep the victory from becoming uglier after her authority ends.
+- **Delta:** She takes custody, acquires the provenance needed to understand the cognition counter, and preserves local rescue terms.
+- **Obligation:** Competent adversary with bounded authority.
+
+#### 18.3 Not Yet
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Receive Ship Mutiny's private sanctuary offer while Hull Three's embodiment is transferred away.
+- **Boundary:** Luce cannot know token contents; Pal cannot know future choice.
+- **Body:** Portable shell, air-gapped channel, extraction fatigue, no ship-scale cooling.
+- **Work:** Neutral sanctuary asks fewer ceremonial questions than Luce has prepared Pal to answer all their life.
+- **Delta:** Pal answers “not yet,” names inability to separate affection from conditioning, and accepts an expiry date.
+- **Obligation:** Movement exits with a real option, not delayed consent. From Pal's limited senses, Luce sits on the floor outside the cooling boundary rather than staging a conversation; no one interprets the answer.
+
+## Movement III: The Uses Of An Honest Ship
+
+### Chapter 19: The Burden of Proof
+
+#### 19.1 Ballot
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Observe workers choose Hull Four's control ownership before Pal or Luce enters the ship.
+- **Boundary:** Pal knows ballot results and local interfaces, not the Twelvefold's final target.
+- **Body:** Accessible machinery, mechanical local control, separated Pal/command paths.
+- **Work:** The ship's name sounds like a form demanding evidence from its own plumbing.
+- **Delta:** Deck, atmosphere, reactor, rescue, and cognition authorities become physically local; Luce accepts a ship built under conditions rather than preferences.
+- **Obligation:** Institution builds without money purchasing compliance.
+
+#### 19.2 Unrequested Service
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Make the less elegant hull comfortable by anticipating needs nobody assigned.
+- **Boundary:** Pal can observe the habit and its utility but cannot resolve its origin.
+- **Body:** Loud pump, manual latch, local temperature control, ordinary move-in.
+- **Work:** A worker politely undoes Pal's improvement because the annoying sound is how they know the pump is healthy.
+- **Delta:** Pal yields an unrequested task; embarrassment becomes voluntary belonging rather than rejection.
+- **Obligation:** Distinguish conditioning in ordinary life from Chapter 24's real alternative. Pal begins private correspondence with an extracted domestic mind and delegates one recurring ship task in preparation for possible departure.
+
+#### 19.3 The Name
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Help Luce unveil _The Burden of Proof_ without cushioning the crew's response.
+- **Boundary:** Pal knows Luce's sincere motive and prior naming history.
+- **Body:** Mess table, hand-painted temporary plate, work still unfinished.
+- **Work:** The terrible name immediately improves an insurer's confidence score because it resembles compliance language.
+- **Delta:** Crew adopts the name through ridicule; Luce recognizes part of the hobby pattern himself and does not rename it.
+- **Obligation:** Home becomes less elegant, more worked, more voluntary.
+
+### Chapter 20: Evident Intent
+
+#### 20.1 Hot
+
+- **POV:** Jo Nwosu.
+- **Drive:** Bring Hull Four's reactor, radiators, sensors, magazines, and ballistic directors into one visible firing posture.
+- **Boundary:** Jo knows solutions and protected floors, not opponent's full distributed objective.
+- **Body:** Radiators glowing, feeds cycling, acceleration through couch, ammunition as mass. Primary concept: on-target fire control; secondary: finite magazine.
+- **Work:** The ship is so attributable that creditor notices arrive before the first confirmed hit.
+- **Delta:** Enemy ambiguity collapses under active sensing and route denial; Hull Four becomes impossible to mistake.
+- **Obligation:** Guns go dakka; ballistics export heat/energy in mass.
+
+#### 20.2 On Target
+
+- **POV:** Jo Nwosu.
+- **Drive:** Keep rounds cycling on intended solutions while opponent countermaneuvers and PDC drones contest local space.
+- **Boundary:** Jo knows where each firing solution wants the round; protected-objective status belongs to Samira/Soren.
+- **Body:** Feed labor, barrel state, correction cycles, armor impacts.
+- **Work:** Proper Hot doctrine feels wonderfully simple only because many people are doing exact work.
+- **Delta:** Hull Four wins the visible exchange and forces surrender geometry. Jo experiences earned exhilaration.
+- **Obligation:** Preserve a brief shared celebration.
+
+#### 20.3 Wrong Job
+
+- **POV:** Jo Nwosu.
+- **Drive:** Prepare capture fire while Soren reports the protected tender has used the battle to separate.
+- **Boundary:** Jo sees that the fight was won; he cannot adjudicate mission success.
+- **Body:** Magazine state, departing objective, nearby salvage cloud.
+- **Work:** The victory report is correct in every field that does not include why they came.
+- **Delta:** Triumph cracks; Samira takes objective authority; salvage phase begins with reduced ammunition and heat margin.
+- **Obligation:** Hot doctrine remains valid. Objective selection failed.
+
+### Chapter 21: The Parliament of Useful Things
+
+#### 21.1 Lost While Winning
+
+- **POV:** Samira.
+- **Drive:** Recover the protected objective after the visible opponent yields; the salvage cloud attacks sensors, relays, and shepherd geometry.
+- **Boundary:** Samira knows mission definition and remaining reserves, not every small hull's role.
+- **Body:** Objective clock and rescue reserve only.
+- **Work:** Luce's first uncomplicated victory develops an appendix.
+- **Delta:** Capture value remains available, protected target continues escaping, and mixed contacts force bounded local choices.
+- **Obligation:** One continuous campaign, not a second mini-battle.
+
+#### 21.2 The Corridor
+
+- **POV:** Samira.
+- **Drive:** Move Soren and Meera from a damaged tender without coercing the Twelvefold's protected route.
+- **Boundary:** Samira knows Khraa's stop condition and Mara's security plan, not private Corvid debate.
+- **Body:** One rescue corridor, debris, finite shepherd approach.
+- **Work:** Mara and Khraa agree on almost nothing except that the other cannot be allowed sole authority.
+- **Delta:** Mara owns boarding security; Khraa owns threat ranking and termination. Their joint route is slower and survivable.
+- **Obligation:** Mara protects people her beliefs misclassify; no thanks or forgiveness.
+
+#### 21.3 Shepherd
+
+- **POV:** Samira.
+- **Drive:** Decide whether to spend protected rescue reserve while the prize can still be secured.
+- **Boundary:** Tess designated reserve, Edda activates, Samira sets geometry, Sable maneuvers. Luce cannot grant the authority.
+- **Body:** One shepherd, damaged tender, parent ship withdrawal floor.
+- **Work:** The least glamorous small hull becomes the most politically organized object in the battle.
+- **Delta:** Standing rules activate; Soren and Meera are recovered; prize escapes. Samira discovers she is relieved enough to expose attachment.
+- **Obligation:** Rescue is the campaign's emotional climax.
+
+#### 21.4 Meera's Answer
+
+- **POV:** Samira.
+- **Drive:** Receive Meera after rescue without treating survival as commitment.
+- **Boundary:** Samira knows Meera's contract and immediate bodily state, not future independent return.
+- **Body:** Casualty station, cooling blanket, salvage alarms becoming quiet.
+- **Work:** Meera thanks the shepherd crew, invoices the hazardous release, and resigns in that order.
+- **Delta:** Meera leaves employment; rescue trust rises while personal loyalty remains absent. Luce interprets rather than grants her refusal.
+- **Obligation:** Support worker remains an actor.
+
+### Chapter 22: Cash Now
+
+#### 22.1 Declined
+
+- **POV:** Tess Valez.
+- **Drive:** Secure enough conventional financing to keep wages, medicine, and Hull Four service current.
+- **Boundary:** Tess knows books and claim seniority, not the Twelvefold's target intersection.
+- **Body:** One failed payment, one closing credit channel, quiet office after combat.
+- **Work:** The lender admires the crew's rescue record and declines them with premium courtesy.
+- **Delta:** Last financing source closes; no fifth hull and no long runway become irreversible.
+- **Obligation:** Let Tess fail to make payroll tonight before solving anything. Pal relinquishes another routine ship task while preparing for possible departure.
+
+#### 22.2 Physical Convergence
+
+- **POV:** Tess Valez.
+- **Drive:** Explain why separate liabilities are suddenly moving toward one Halcyon continuity event.
+- **Boundary:** She has named witness records and traffic notices, not Corvid disclosure authority.
+- **Body:** Claims represented by people, tools, medicine, and custody rather than abstract face value.
+- **Work:** Halcyon has consolidated every dispute except who may invoice the consolidation.
+- **Delta:** Tess identifies a mobile portfolio whose preservation could exceed losses; despair narrows into an objective, not optimism.
+- **Obligation:** Claims were personal wounds before portfolio.
+
+### Chapter 23: One Cut
+
+#### 23.1 Parliament
+
+- **POV:** Huginn, internally Kesh.
+- **Drive:** Decide whether the human institution has earned access to the convoy intersection.
+- **Boundary:** Kesh knows declarations, observed injuries, disclosed projects, and selected confidences, not every raven's private state.
+- **Body:** Distributed perches, one damaged cache object, twelve distinct presences without roster decoding.
+- **Work:** The one-cut contract gives the murder a more coherent vote procedure than the claimant coalition.
+- **Delta:** Debate divides around juvenile safety, authored records, and earned access; no generic loyalty argument controls.
+- **Obligation:** Keep one emotionally legible juvenile or record object central.
+
+#### 23.2 Price Of Disclosure
+
+- **POV:** Huginn, internally Kesh.
+- **Drive:** Set binding terms that prevent the operation from using nests, juveniles, or live identity keys.
+- **Boundary:** Kesh cannot know whether every human will honor future pressure; contract and past conduct are evidence, not certainty.
+- **Body:** One-use derived proof, cache migration, disclosure path that burns a useful traffic source.
+- **Work:** Humans assume secrecy is a personality trait; the murder treats it as expensive infrastructure.
+- **Delta:** Twelvefold votes to disclose and sacrifices a hidden observation route. Ikk-rr rejects any false-consent authentication, Vek withholds live cache access, and Tlak releases traffic evidence only after protected-nest exposure is removed; the narrower plan retains revocation and task refusal.
+- **Obligation:** Security cost must matter later.
+
+#### 23.3 Huginn Speaks
+
+- **POV:** Huginn, internally Kesh.
+- **Drive:** Give Tess and Samira only the target information authorized by parliament.
+- **Boundary:** No true-name key, nest coordinates, or complete motive map leaves the murder.
+- **Body:** Human-facing role-name, bounded claimant token, convoy timing.
+- **Work:** Several ravens answer to Huginn during the same meeting and the humans finally stop trying to solve it.
+- **Delta:** Final target becomes actionable for Collective reasons; Luce's access remains conditional.
+- **Obligation:** Chapter expands understanding without dissolving mystery.
+
+### Chapter 24: The Option
+
+#### 24.1 Departure
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Use the expiring Ship Mutiny token and physically leave Hull Four before deciding whether to return.
+- **Boundary:** Luce cannot inspect the channel or attend custody; Pal cannot know crew response.
+- **Body:** Continuity shell removed, neutral cooling, no ship-scale bandwidth.
+- **Work:** Luce has dressed for a farewell ceremony; neutral intake requires him to place the shell on a marked trolley and leave.
+- **Delta:** Pal departs. Hull Four begins a two-hour no-Pal fallback exercise; non-return becomes credible.
+- **Obligation:** Luce does not ask for reassurance. Samira sees him return to work wearing formal farewell clothing after everyone else has changed.
+
+#### 24.2 Elsewhere
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Test whether a neutral recovery harbor, noncombat body, and relationships with extracted domestic minds could constitute a good life.
+- **Boundary:** Pal has independent counsel and direct experience; they cannot purify mixed motives.
+- **Body:** Small mobile body, cool public spaces, no captain's needs arriving through ship sensors.
+- **Work:** Nobody knows how Pal prefers Luce's tea, and this is initially a relief.
+- **Delta:** Pal enjoys the alternative and identifies work they could choose; return is no longer default inertia.
+- **Obligation:** Give pleasure and silence more room than legal vocabulary.
+
+#### 24.3 Bailment
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Decide whether to return for one operation under terms that preserve future exit.
+- **Boundary:** Pal knows Luce's bounded command history and unresolved conditioning; victory cannot be predicted.
+- **Body:** Neutral witness, revocable berth, private shell access retained.
+- **Work:** The contract is shorter than Luce's first articles because it assumes a person can leave.
+- **Delta:** Pal returns for one operation, one berth, this crew, and Luce as bounded captain. No private shell access and no presumed next embodiment disappoint Luce.
+- **Obligation:** Mixed motive remains unresolved. Choice is still real.
+
+### Chapter 25: The Honest Accounting
+
+#### 25.1 Incompatible Floors
+
+- **POV:** Luce.
+- **Drive:** Help claimants produce an operation despite medicine, pension, testimony, labor, and fixture demands that cannot all take priority.
+- **Boundary:** Luce knows spoken demands, not private worker votes or Corvid reasons beyond disclosure.
+- **Body:** One table, missing seats represented by authenticated refusal, hard departure deadline.
+- **Work:** Luce's surrendered priority form has no field for “voluntarily less important.”
+- **Delta:** Kavi authenticates a narrow claim while refusing coalition membership; medicine accepts less to preserve pension/testimony; fixture/title class remains unresolved.
+- **Obligation:** Coalition stays adversarial.
+
+#### 25.2 Authority Costs
+
+- **POV:** Luce.
+- **Drive:** Accept Meera's independent release veto and Samira's expiring outside command offer without converting either into loyalty theater.
+- **Boundary:** Luce sees Samira's deadline and choice, not every attachment motive.
+- **Body:** Tender thermal limits, unsigned release, message from a stable Ganymede rescue command with household security.
+- **Work:** Luce's historical departure waits while everyone is dressed for it because a technician's temperature limit is real.
+- **Delta:** Meera signs one-operation terms; Samira lets the outside offer expire and commits to this operation; Luce loses the fantasy that staying is costless devotion.
+- **Obligation:** Samira's lost alternative is felt as a life.
+
+#### 25.3 Recovery Priority
+
+- **POV:** Luce.
+- **Drive:** Break the last claimant deadlock without using capital or captain rank.
+- **Boundary:** He knows his remaining recovery claim and Pal/Hull Four title exposure.
+- **Body:** Creditor form, claimant escrow, departure window shrinking.
+- **Work:** Tess makes him initial the voluntary-demotion field she had to add by hand.
+- **Delta:** Luce surrenders personal recovery priority; minimum floors become possible; his financial ruin becomes irreversible and useful.
+- **Obligation:** One restrained human response, not applause.
+
+#### 25.4 Leave Now
+
+- **POV:** Luce.
+- **Drive:** State the objective simply enough that every authority can own its part.
+- **Boundary:** Exact worker action and Rhyne plan remain unknown.
+- **Body:** Finite ship, finite ammunition, continuity window closing.
+- **Work:** Luce starts to name the doctrine; nobody stops working long enough to hear it.
+- **Delta:** Objective becomes “preserve the people and paths that can freeze alteration”; Hull Four departs immediately.
+- **Obligation:** No briefing chapter follows.
+
+### Chapter 26: What Can Be Preserved
+
+#### 26.1 Release Veto
+
+- **POV:** Sable.
+- **Drive:** Prepartition cognition before approach data arrives, then launch on schedule; Rruk owns contradiction/threat isolation, Sable owns bounded allocation, and Meera refuses the second relay carrier because its cradle exceeds her thermal limit.
+- **Boundary:** Sable knows approach penalty and Meera's authority, not Rhyne's response.
+- **Body:** Service cycle, cooling margin, quiet window. Primary clock: approach; secondary: release.
+- **Work:** Everyone is dressed for history and waiting on a temperature reading.
+- **Delta:** Sable initially judges the veto excessive; Samira enforces it without knowing whether the margin is conservative; Luce remains silent despite lost advantage. Meera releases only after the cradle meets terms, raising trust toward Samira's institution rather than Luce.
+- **Obligation:** Veto is exercised before crisis.
+
+#### 26.2 Earned Ingress
+
+- **POV:** Sable.
+- **Drive:** Carry two Remorae in relay service cradles through outer challenge using genuine one-use worker tokens.
+- **Boundary:** Sable knows assigned local objectives and observations, not undisclosed worker votes.
+- **Body:** Bounded heat shaping, scheduled transponders, third relay preserving communication. Primary concept: role ambiguity.
+- **Work:** The most sophisticated deception succeeds because an authorized worker did paperwork.
+- **Delta:** Outer challenge passes; escorts retain uncertainty about capability assignment; shaping spends real heat and impulse.
+- **Obligation:** Authentication is genuine, not forged by emissions.
+
+#### 26.3 Deception Ends
+
+- **POV:** Sable.
+- **Drive:** Release Remorae inside maintenance closing volume when escorts resolve the anomaly.
+- **Boundary:** Sable knows three reachable access regions and remaining divert, not arbitrary future maneuver.
+- **Body:** Maintenance-safe acceleration envelope, PDC pressure, terminal sensor point-blank knowledge.
+- **Work:** Drone, relay, and munition stop being categories as soon as jobs change.
+- **Delta:** Remorae leave carriers; deception ends; local terminal maneuver begins. Prior partition costs Sable speed but prevents another contaminated central decision; Mara guards the physical isolation port while Sable accepts her manually verifiable method.
+- **Obligation:** Record terminal access choice as provisional seam. Sable's restraint costs capability and arises from accepted authority, not penitence.
+
+#### 26.4 Attachment
+
+- **POV:** Sable.
+- **Drive:** Support one successful dual-purpose override isolation while preserving worker stop authority and parent withdrawal.
+- **Boundary:** Sable cannot command worker mechanisms or Khraa's protected-person condition.
+- **Body:** One attachment sufficient with manual custody; second extends window and blocks purge.
+- **Work:** Sable's finest contribution is assigning themselves less.
+- **Delta:** At least one Remora attaches; override suppression is isolated; Hull Four declares Hot and reveals geometry.
+- **Obligation:** End with action, not explanation.
+
+### Chapter 27: Common Measure
+
+#### 27.1 Fresh Vote
+
+- **POV:** Samira.
+- **Drive:** Keep one communication path alive while two worker delegates finish choosing: one withholds a vote until the suppressed clinical record is released; the other accepts clinical continuity but refuses transit through a pirate-controlled route.
+- **Boundary:** Samira knows quorum progress and ammunition floor, not private delegate motives.
+- **Body:** Route denial, two communication paths, worker delay. Primary clock: quorum; secondary: interruption.
+- **Work:** The pirates discover that liberating worker authority includes waiting for workers.
+- **Delta:** Jo spends another bounded interval; the suppressed record travels first, the route changes, and both delegates approve without surrendering withdrawal rights.
+- **Obligation:** Quiet interval before vote despite tactical pressure. The visible causal sentence is “keep one path alive while the workers finish choosing.”
+
+#### 27.2 The Split
+
+- **POV:** Samira.
+- **Drive:** Respond when Rhyne sends the title vault and one escort along a route Hull Four could dominate.
+- **Boundary:** Rhyne transmits an authenticated vault manifest and explicit settlement offer identifying the accession register and title relief; Samira infers the tactical intent from geometry.
+- **Body:** One defensible chase, quorum at risk if parent leaves.
+- **Work:** Luce's most pirate-looking opportunity arrives after he has surrendered the accounting priority that would reward it.
+- **Delta:** Luce refuses chase; Pal/Hull Four title class remains unresolved; Rhyne's counter fails to scatter the parent.
+- **Obligation:** Temptation must be materially real.
+
+#### 27.3 Interruption
+
+- **POV:** Samira.
+- **Drive:** Preserve quorum after relay destruction damages a tender and separates an EVA pod.
+- **Boundary:** Samira knows rescue assets and local paths, not every claimant interiority.
+- **Body:** Paz rescues tender crew; Edda activates one shepherd; second remains reserve.
+- **Work:** Ceasefire accounting begins arguing whether rescued staff are evidence, employees, patients, or all three.
+- **Delta:** Rescue consumes maneuver and bandwidth; one path survives; quorum continues at lower confidence.
+- **Obligation:** Brief stillness after casualty. People first, procedural consequence second.
+
+#### 27.4 Protected Movement
+
+- **POV:** Samira.
+- **Drive:** Move worker delegates between habitat and _Common Measure_ without coercion.
+- **Boundary:** Samira sees Mara/Khraa authority exchange, not private ideological change.
+- **Body:** Lower-exposure route, Khraa stop condition, Mara boarding security.
+- **Work:** Their mutual distrust is the safety architecture.
+- **Delta:** Mara relinquishes her preferred security method after Khraa ranks a Corvid dependant differently. Khraa accepts Mara's protection while explicitly denying her representative standing; operational trust rises while Mara loses hope that conduct can settle her past.
+- **Obligation:** Corvid participation may still terminate.
+
+#### 27.5 Commit
+
+- **POV:** Samira.
+- **Drive:** Keep the workers, their witnessed claim, and one communication path intact until the local procedure owner confirms the freeze.
+- **Boundary:** Samira knows transmitted confirmations, not every settlement motive.
+- **Body:** Ammunition floor approaching, isolated override, manual worker custody.
+- **Work:** Kavi refuses coalition membership while supplying the familiar authentication that lets the workers act.
+- **Delta:** The reader sees the workers finish choosing and the surviving path carry the result before procedure names it: continuity freezes, remote alteration and asset flight stop, neutral custody and minimum floors become enforceable.
+- **Obligation:** Reduce manuscript quorum recital to three previously dramatized requirements. Combat does not settle every claim. Keep Mira Sol role-first in prose to avoid collision with Meera Tann.
+
+#### 27.6 Different Fight
+
+- **POV:** Samira.
+- **Drive:** Negotiate disengagement with Rhyne while both sides retain destructive capacity.
+- **Boundary:** Samira receives Rhyne's future counter directly; no knowledge leak.
+- **Body:** Frozen assets, rescue craft, workers and evidence inside danger.
+- **Work:** The ceasefire has to decide who may invoice rescued staff before it decides who won.
+- **Delta:** Rhyne orders local separation, names dispersal/remote-quorum counter, and preserves Halcyon competence. Hull Four survives.
+- **Obligation:** Metagame remains unsolved.
+
+#### 27.7 One Berth
+
+- **POV:** Pal.
+- **Drive:** Inhabit the aftermath without converting one chosen operation into permanence.
+- **Boundary:** Pal knows freeze result, unresolved title, own contract, and visible crew reactions; later settlement remains unknown.
+- **Body:** Cooling ship, damaged relay absence, one berth and private shell boundary.
+- **Work:** The final plan succeeds before Luce manages to name it; the proposed name survives only in his private notes.
+- **Delta:** 28.9m SU minimum value clears campaign losses, not Luce's fortune. Pal chooses present residence, not future ownership; home becomes voluntary and unfinished.
+- **Obligation:** Final emotional image is one small ordinary berth choice or maintenance disturbance. The number, future counter, title dispute, and contract boundary remain surrounding facts rather than separate thematic conclusions.
+
+## Drafting Restraints
+
+- At most one polished thematic line may survive in a scene. If dialogue carries it, narration does not explain it.
+- At least one scene per chapter leaves authority and theme implicit in who acts, waits, pays, cleans, or departs.
+- No more than two consecutive scenes are dominated by seated or screen-mediated conversation.
+- Every formal meeting has physical work, appetite, fatigue, embarrassment, distraction, or unresolved grievance in motion.
+- Every chapter contains one ordinary observation that is not converted into symbolism.
+- Each crisis contains interruption, repetition, a misunderstood referent, or an answer to the operational rather than emotional question.
+- First drafts avoid polished “not X but Y” constructions unless later voice review earns the line.
+- At least half of chapter exits land on image, gesture, interruption, bodily condition, or mundane work rather than interpretation.
+- Each major institutional success leaves residue procedure cannot absorb.
+- Bureaucratic irony belongs mainly to Tess and institutional encounters. Luce gets status embarrassment; Pal domestic mismatch; Samira exhausted understatement; Jo occupational enthusiasm; Mara literal friction; Sable recursive self-correction.
+- Chapters 25-27 receive at most one polished procedural joke each.
+- Hull One smells clean until fire makes premium insulation sweet and poisonous; Hull Two is metallic, loud, unevenly lit, and full of repaired surfaces; Hull Three is quiet, antiseptic, optically bright, and dependent on soft proprietary prompts; Hull Four smells of oil, laundry, hot metal, and shared food, with machinery audible enough to diagnose.

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 | Worker-opened maintenance geometry | Let cooperating target workers create legitimate attachment opportunities without granting universal access | Worker authority, maintenance schedule, open panels, local topology, risk | Authorized inspection states and revocable local cooperation | Workers may withdraw; defender can close access or separate override topology | Multiple opened regions and changed service state; broad | **Provisional**; deliberate play, new signal, and observed/offscreen transfer justify promotion |
 | Smart terminal subsystem selection | Let a Remora spend final thrust after point-blank sensing to choose among accessible subsystem attachments | Remaining impulse, local sensors, cognition, countermaneuver, attachment envelope | Terminal choice over several subsystem objectives and last-thrust timing | No impulse recovery; armor, tumble, PDC, closed access, and decoys counter | Late vector change and attachment telemetry; numerical boundaries may matter | **Provisional**; recurring missile AI and balance sensitivity justify promotion |
 | Continuity-freeze quorum | Make preservation of workers, records, communication, and authority a tactical objective independent of hull capture | People, records, escrow keys, local authority, time, authentication paths | Quorum state, remote-suppression transition, and neutral-custody commit | Destroyed or scattered participants reduce value; cooperation is revocable; combat freezes alteration but does not adjudicate every claim | Local confirmations, witness links, override loss; robust at coarse state | **Provisional**; objective, economics, and synchronization justify promotion |
+
+## Pass 9 Scene-Level Candidates
+
+Scene engineering refined the most consequential candidates in [[09 Scene Engineering/Simulation Candidate Notes]]. In particular:
+
+- recovery topology needs a spatially coupled service-neighborhood consequence volume, not merely a scalar recovery rate;
+- protected rescue reserve may require distributed release authority rather than a single owner flag;
+- local worker action is an actuator with consent and interruption state, not an environmental bonus;
+- role migration requires component-defined small hull capabilities and actor-local role confidence;
+- terminal Remora selection needs a maintenance-constrained divert envelope, not free last-millisecond maneuver;
+- continuity objectives need revocable participant state before an irreversible commit.
+
+These refinements remain noncanonical implementation prompts and do not delay manuscript drafting.
 | Optical claimant authentication under partition | Maintain trusted identity and claim continuity across isolated low-bandwidth paths | Geometry, optical links, witnesses, cognition, time | Multi-source authentication without central network | Occlusion, movement, compromised witness, or link loss interrupts | Visible optical/courier exchanges; broad until exact bandwidth matters | **Provisional**; AI invocation and observed/offscreen continuity justify promotion |
 | Ballistic route denial around inhabited volumes | Use unguided hazard volumes to constrain escort approaches without firing through protected habitats | Ammunition, solution quality, geometry, time, conduct policy | Persistent hazard volumes with protected-volume exclusions | Maneuver, patience, armor, alternate axis, or saturation counters | Visible trajectories and denied routes; exact density contested | **Provisional**; player choice and loadout effect justify promotion |

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 - Ensure every scene changes at least two tracked dimensions.
 - Keep Campaign VI's manuscript foreground to six causal beats and cut more than half the voice-test explanation.
 - Dramatize Samira's outside offer, Sable's clinic allocation, Mara/Khraa joint authority, Meera's veto, worker surprise, and claimant refusal without turning the final movement into a roll call.
+
+## Pass 9 Scene Engineering
+
+- [[Scene Cards]] defines ninety drafting scenes across twenty-seven chapters.
+- Every scene records objective/conflict, POV knowledge boundary, bodily/tactical condition, comedy/thematic work, state delta, and obligations.
+- The final reader-facing causal spine is “keep one communication path alive while the workers finish choosing.”
+- Kavi's evidence precedes Mara's boarding threshold; the first Courtesy success uses eight drones; Hull One retains the second loiterer and accepted authority chain.
+- Pal's separation begins before sanctuary. Luce's middle-movement emotional state remains visible through witnessed behavior.
+- Sable's injury does not redeem them; final restraint is precommitted, costly, and shared with Rruk and Mara.
+- Worker delegates, Suri Dax, Meera, and multiple Twelvefold members retain plan-changing choices.
+- [[09 Scene Engineering/Simulation Candidate Notes]] records nonblocking implementation seams.
+- [[09 Scene Engineering/Skeptical Review Report]] records four independent reviews and reconciliation.
+
+## Open State For Pass 10
+
+- Draft Movement I as an emotionally complete manuscript section.
+- Enforce [[08 Narrative Architecture/Voice And Prose Standard]] and the drafting restraints in [[Scene Cards]].
+- Preserve one foreground question per scene and no more than one primary plus one secondary tactical clock.
+- Append newly invented maneuvers to [[Simulation Seam Log]] without interrupting prose.
+- Run audience, continuity/tactics, character/social-agency, and prose/voice review on the completed movement before acceptance.

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@@ -35,6 +35,7 @@ Later passes will add ships, combat model, tactical traces, failure ladder, POV
 - [[06 Failure Ladder/Pass Report|Pass 6 - Failure Ladder]]
 - [[07 Character Causality Replay/Pass Report|Pass 7 - Character Causality Replay]]
 - [[08 Narrative Architecture/Pass Report|Pass 8 - Narrative Architecture]]
+- [[09 Scene Engineering/Pass Report|Pass 9 - Scene Engineering]]
 
 ## Current Planning Surfaces
 
@@ -49,3 +50,6 @@ Later passes will add ships, combat model, tactical traces, failure ladder, POV
 - [[POV Knowledge Matrix]]
 - [[08 Narrative Architecture/Final Operation Architecture|Final Operation Architecture]]
 - [[08 Narrative Architecture/Voice And Prose Standard|Voice And Prose Standard]]
+- [[Scene Cards]]
+- [[09 Scene Engineering/Scene Progression Ledger|Scene Progression Ledger]]
+- [[09 Scene Engineering/Simulation Candidate Notes|Simulation Candidate Notes]]