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Aetheria/Brainstorming/Stories/The Body That Asks/Foundry/Revision 01/Phase 04/Pass Report.md

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+# Phase 4 Report
+
+## Objective
+
+Draft the accepted sixty-nine-chapter revision as inhabited novel prose, preserving explicit POV, the reverse Calyx braid, a full sophomore year of school, character-local Persona state, and the protected climax and aftermath.
+
+## Accepted Candidate Artifacts
+
+- [[Movement I Draft]] — Chapters 1–27
+- [[Movement II Draft]] — Chapters 28–56
+- [[Movement III Draft]] — Chapters 57–69
+
+These movement files are accepted inputs to whole-book integration. The published Fiction manuscript remains canonical until promotion.
+
+## Scale And Shape
+
+- Movement I occupies roughly 25,600 words.
+- Movement II occupies roughly 26,000 words.
+- Movement III occupies roughly 14,300 words.
+- All sixty-nine chapters print an explicit POV.
+- All ten Calyx/Meridian pairs remain adjacent in the accepted corresponding roles.
+
+The expansion was performed in bounded chapter blocks. Early transaction-level scaffolds were rejected rather than mistaken for prose. Each accepted block contains enacted work, dialogue, interruption, material consequence, and relationship residue appropriate to its chapter.
+
+## Major Repairs During Drafting
+
+- Reprojected Movement I from the accepted Lio Vask, Tem Rusk, and Iri Sable Personas; removed stale names, pronouns, and sibling framing while preserving Omi/Lio ward history.
+- Preserved ordinary academics, paid work, named peer ownership, family routes, injury afterlife, and clue-free school chapters across the year.
+- Slowed the P9 Harrowglass merge and late Movement II repair sequence; distributed office practice before qualification; made Senn's asked refusal cost the final warm-up slot.
+- Restored the Chapter 56/57 reveal boundary: Chapter 56 contains destination and locked in-transit material; Chapter 57 owns the Palisade map and clean briefing.
+- Expanded full Concordance through repeated failure, office rotation, withdrawal, recomputation, exhilaration, and irreversible cost.
+- Made the no-sleep Necro contingency visible in degraded speech, failed shorthand, misheard numbers, a damaging decision, and caught mistakes.
+- Reduced coordinator narration that explained institutional or relational meaning after procedure and action had already carried it.
+
+## Review
+
+Independent cold fiction, structural, voice/theme, and Foundry continuity passes reviewed the movements separately and as one book. Final blocker-only checks found:
+
+- sixty-nine unique chapters and sixty-nine explicit POV labels;
+- exact pair adjacency and no cross-time knowledge transfer;
+- accepted names, pronouns, ward asymmetry, support ownership, and Persona continuity;
+- Palisade quarantine through the Chapter 56 order boundary;
+- practiced climax transfers with local expertise retained;
+- one continuous, subtractive AFTER history;
+- protected Necro, Vey, worker-route, refusal, anti-reincarnation, and six-entry ending material intact;
+- no remaining structural, continuity, or voice blocker.
+
+## Next Gate
+
+Phase 5 assembles and cold-reads the complete candidate manuscript, performs cross-movement prose and terminology checks, then promotes the accepted revision to `Aetheria/Fiction/The Body That Asks.md`. EPUB and web-reader artifacts are rebuilt only from the promoted manuscript.

Aetheria/Brainstorming/Stories/The Body That Asks/Foundry/Revision 01/index.md

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 ## Current Phase
 
-Phase 4 — chapter stewardship and prose drafting.
+Phase 5 — whole-book integration and promotion review.
 
 Phase 0 is recorded in [[Phase 00/Pass Report|the baseline report]].
 Seven independent diagnoses are preserved under `Phase 01/`. The accepted architecture is recorded in [[Phase 02/Pass Report|Phase 2 Synthesis]].
 Subject proposals remain under `Phase 02A/`; coordinator rulings and the accepted chapter map are in [[Phase 02B/Pass Report|Phase 2B]].
 Accepted scene transactions, replay authority, support continuity, and twelve materialized Persona streams are recorded in [[Phase 03/Pass Report|Phase 3]].
+The complete sixty-nine-chapter candidate prose is recorded in [[Phase 04/Pass Report|Phase 4]].
 
 The canonical Fiction manuscript remains the published baseline while revision proceeds. Candidate architecture and prose in this folder have no authority over it until coordinator promotion.

Aetheria/Brainstorming/Stories/The Body That Asks/Foundry/Story State.md

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 ## Run
 
-- **Current pass:** Revision 01, Phase 4 — chapter stewardship and prose drafting.
+- **Current pass:** Revision 01, Phase 5 — whole-book integration and promotion review.
 - **Mode:** Post-draft Revision Council rebuild.
 - **Operator authority:** Autonomous continuation toward the complete story.
 - **Length policy:** No target or ceiling.
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 - Phase 2A produced seven concrete proposal packets.
 - Phase 2B adjudicated proposals and accepted a sixty-nine-chapter explicit-POV transaction blueprint.
 - Phase 3 accepted sixty-nine scene transactions, the exact ten-pair POV braid, named ordinary-school continuity, a lived-order Calyx replay, and twelve gapless Persona streams on `revision-01-main`.
-- Phase 4 must draft from the accepted scene packets and projected Persona revisions. Changes to POV, chronology, ancestry, mystery timing, academic ownership, or protected material return to Phase 3 replay before descendants continue.
+- Phase 4 produced and reviewed sixty-nine chapters of candidate prose across three movements. Final blocker checks found the candidate structurally and narratively ready for whole-book integration.
+- Phase 5 must assemble the complete candidate, verify cross-movement prose and terminology, and promote only after manuscript-level review. Changes to POV, chronology, ancestry, mystery timing, academic ownership, or protected material return to Phase 3 replay before descendants continue.
 - Candidate revision prose remains noncanonical; the promoted Fiction manuscript governs until final integration and promotion.
 
 ## Next Inputs
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 - [[Revision 01/Phase 03/Movement I Scene Transactions|Movement I Scene Transactions]]
 - [[Revision 01/Phase 03/Movement II Scene Transactions|Movement II Scene Transactions]]
 - [[Revision 01/Phase 03/Movement III Scene Transactions|Movement III Scene Transactions]]
+- [[Revision 01/Phase 04/Pass Report|Phase 4 Report]]
+- [[Revision 01/Phase 04/Movement I Draft|Movement I Draft]]
+- [[Revision 01/Phase 04/Movement II Draft|Movement II Draft]]
+- [[Revision 01/Phase 04/Movement III Draft|Movement III Draft]]