rust-to-dust: draft imperial language design spec (r0)
Speech community and status ladder, phonology, stance/restraint marking, meaning decomposition, and the packet fields the lowerer must provide. Evidence and invention tagged throughout. Co-Authored-By: Claude Sonnet 5.5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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# Rust to Dust Imperial Language: Design Spec
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Status: **DRAFT r0.** First conlang project for Rust to Dust. Nothing here is
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canon until the operator rules on it.
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The language has no name. Its working slug is `rtd-imperial`. A name is owed
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and should come from the ontology and phonology below, as
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[setting.md](../setting.md) asks, not from an English label. Nothing here
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assigns one.
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## How To Read This
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Every claim carries a tag:
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- **[E]** evidence. The source material says it, and the file is cited.
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- **[I]** invention. This draft proposes it. The operator can overrule it, and
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it is the part most worth attacking.
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- **[E→I]** an extension. The source gives a seed and this draft develops it.
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Sources read: everything under `settings/rust-to-dust/` (`README`, `setting`,
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`aliens`, `story`, `battle-royale`, `language-design`), the house method in
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`settings/eusocial-interbeing/language-design.md`, and Weksa's
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`docs/language-model.md`, `interlingua-standard.md`,
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`best-modern-approach.md`, `multilingual-utterance-lowering.md` and
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`schemas/interlingua-packet.md`. The stance design is read from the unmerged
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branch `weksa-lowering/speaker-state` (see Dependencies). The forge repos and
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Weksa `state/` and `docs/` hold no other Rust to Dust material: a forge search
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for the setting returned nothing outside Weksa. This draft therefore rests on
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about 440 lines of setting prose, and the invention share is large.
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## 1. Speech Community
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### Who speaks it [E]
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The empire's aliens: reptilian, scale-decorating, aesthetics-as-moral-truth,
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honor as devotion to aesthetic perfection in a chosen field (`aliens.md`). The
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empire is galaxy-spanning, so the language is a **network language**. Its
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community is defined by the imperial cultural network (media, prestige,
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commerce), not by a homeland. Humans are not native speakers. They meet it
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through subtitles, memes and broadcasts, and their contaminated English is a
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separate register (`language-design.md`, Registers).
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### Speech situations [E→I]
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`language-design.md` lists registers. This draft turns each into a situation
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with a speaker, an addressee and a stake, because a register is a relationship
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and not a vocabulary list:
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| Situation | Speaker → addressee | Stake | Source |
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| Broadcast commentary | commentator → mass imperial audience, about a performer | rendering an aesthetic verdict in real time | E (battle-royale) |
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| High honor speech | warrior or master → rival, patron or witness | binding a vow, naming a performance | E (register list) |
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| Warrior discourse | practitioner ↔ practitioner of one field | form, discipline, challenge | E (register list) |
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| Commercial acquisition | buyer ↔ seller, or buyer → cultural object | access and integration phrased as uplift | E (setting: commerce as delivery rail) |
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| Panel-show media | host ↔ guest before an audience | turning the guest's stance into performance | E (story: the panel) |
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| Tourist admiration | tourist → anything | consuming a safe spectacle | E (aliens: tourists) |
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| Address to humans | any → human | uplift, fascination, appraisal | I |
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The last row is added. The story's central irony is that the empire
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understands the father's refusal better than he understands the empire, so
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how imperial speakers address humans is a design surface, not an afterthought.
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The first proving slice is **broadcast commentary** [E]: `battle-royale.md`
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names it as the runtime use, and it needs the fewest situations to be
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distinguishable by a reader.
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### Status ladder [I]
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The source gives status *signals* (scale decoration marks profession, class,
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rank, grief, celebrity, courtship, school, combat discipline, public
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obligation, commitments) and a *measure* (the more elaborate the decoration,
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the more visible the claim of virtue). It gives no ladder. The invention:
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status is two axes, not one.
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- **Field.** The discipline one is devoted to (combat, speech, hosting, trade,
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politics, art). Honor is field-relative [E]. A master of one field has no
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rank in another.
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- **Standing in the field**, by *claim and demonstrated constraint*, not by
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force:
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1. **Unclaimed.** No decoration in a field. This is shameless, not neutral
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[E: unpainted = shamelessness].
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2. **Claimant.** Decorated, undemonstrated. Tourists live here: the claim is
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bought and the constraint never chosen [E: tourists buy a safe spectacle].
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3. **Practitioner.** Decorated, with constraint demonstrated in the field.
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4. **Master.** Constraint demonstrated before witnesses.
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5. **Exemplar.** Master whose form others cite.
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- **Bare-by-claim** is an exceptional state off the ladder, not a step on it.
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Going unpainted as an artistic claim that the performance alone is art is a
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provocation [E]. The grammar must be able to say it without saying
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"shameless".
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The language's address and agreement system tracks **claim versus
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demonstrated constraint**, because that is what the source treats as the
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moral measure. A tourist's loud, expensive decoration is a *mismatch* the
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language can state, and the language carries that mismatch in the grammar
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itself.
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Decoration is the primary status channel in the world. In speech it surfaces
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as address terms, honorific-like marking and metaphor (Section 4), not as a
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phoneme-level trick.
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## 2. Phonology (provisional)
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The source gives no phonetic profile. It poses the question
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(`language-design.md`, Open Questions) and says naming should follow from
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phonetics. House method (Zyphos) assigns Airawa hard dorsal and coronal
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edges and Sa'auei'a soft flow. This language must not collapse onto either
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[I].
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### Design stance [I]
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Three pressures from the source, turned into sound:
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1. **Aesthetic devotion**: the language should sound *composed*. Prosody is
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deliberate, with controlled length, no clutter.
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2. **Chosen constraint is mastery**: constraint should be audible. Phonotactics
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are *tight*, so that a speaker visibly refrains from the permitted-in-vulgar
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alternatives.
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3. **Reptilian body** [E: reptilian]: the inventory leans on sustained
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fricatives, hisses and trills that a non-human vocal tract makes easy. The
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source does not specify a vocal tract. This is the weakest-evidenced
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choice and a human-pronounceable romanization is therefore required.
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### Inventory (draft)
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- **Stops** (voiceless only): `t`, `k`, `ʔ`. No voiced stops. This separates it
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from Airawa's `g d q`.
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- **Fricatives**: `s`, `ʃ`, `x`, `h`, with voiced `z`, `ʒ`. Fricatives
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contrast in **length**: short and held. Held fricatives are the language's
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main prosodic ornament and carry register weight (Section 3).
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- **Sonorants**: `n`, `m`, `l`, trilled `r`.
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- **Vowels**: `a`, `i`, `u`, `e`, each short or long. A long vowel is the
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other register-bearing length.
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- **Syllables**: `(C)V(C)`, coda `s n l ʔ` only. No clusters. The absence of
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clusters is the phonotactic form of "chosen constraint".
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### Prosody [I]
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- Stress and length are the speaker's expressive budget. In formal
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registers, *less* length variation reads as more command of the form. A
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commentator in broadcast register may spend length on a performer's
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moment, and an honor-speech speaker withholds it. Restraint is therefore
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audible without a phoneme change (Section 3).
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- Broadcast commentary has a lengthened, sibilant "announcer" delivery. Tourists
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over-lengthen. Master speech under-lengthens.
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### Romanization and rendering [I]
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An ASCII romanization is owed before any lowering output is scored: the
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speaker-state lowering renders text, and the renderer for the audience needs
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a stable orthography. `ʃ ʒ x ʔ` need ASCII digraphs. The choice follows
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the Weksa pronunciation-lowering docs and belongs to a later cut.
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### Open
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- The inventory is a sketch, drawn from three pressures. It should be rerun
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after at least a hundred roots exist, not defended.
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- The source calls for names to "emerge from ontology and phonetics". This
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draft supplies phonetics, and the name waits for the first root set.
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## 3. Register, Status and Restraint: Stance Explicit
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### Weksa's constraint [E]
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On the unmerged `speaker-state` branch, `docs/interlingua-standard.md` adds
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a packet `stance`: **felt affect** (anger, fear, sadness, joy, disgust, surprise,
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contempt, affection, shame, as grades) and **`restraint`**, how much of the
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felt affect is held back (0 none, 1000 fully). It is felt, never displayed.
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How a feeling shows and how much leaks is cultural; each language's ontology
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maps felt affect and restraint to its own register. A held-back feeling is not
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a claim, so it is never a predication.
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This language must therefore **mark stance explicitly in its own grammar**,
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and the marking is derived from the packet's `stance`, never from English
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register words in the source text.
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### Why this language is the hard case for restraint [E→I]
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For the empire, restraint is not suppression of a shameful interior. It is
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**the visible form of chosen constraint**, which is the moral proof of
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mastery [E]. So the map from `restraint` to surface is *inverted* relative to
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- High restraint is the *display* of virtue. A fully restrained speaker with
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strong felt affect is exhibiting form.
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- Low restraint with strong affect is not honest. It is *vulgar* [E: "vulgar
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violence as failed form"; "collapse into mere function"].
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level. Two axes are needed, and the source's lens questions (elegant,
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Proposed grammatical commitments (the target-language selections that step 4
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situation. Evaluation is expressed as a **separate discourse layer**
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(a particle or clause layer), not as adjectives in the content: the
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lens questions [E] (elegant, disciplined, sincere, vulgar, memorable,
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promising, mastery, collapse) are the layer's open slots. It is
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about the world, and the interlingua keeps content and attitude
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separate. Feeds from: `discourse` features and the situation.
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performer's sincerity. The inference must be marked, because the source
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puts sincerity in the performer, who is not the speaker and not available to
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telemetry. Feeds from: the evidentiality feature the standard already
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Register is not a setting on the speaker. It is selected from the pair
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(speaker's standing and community, scene relation to addressee and subject)
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`language-ontology` cut will implement as deterministic selection
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`select(profile, stance, speaker, scene)`. This spec supplies the **content
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of that selection table** for this language; it does not write the table.
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Cases the table must cover first:
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| Commentator, high restraint, strong approval of a restrained low-means act | finished marking; evaluative layer foregrounded; length withheld |
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| Commentator, low restraint, strong approval | raw marking; the speaker is performing delight. Only permitted in tourist-adjacent registers |
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| Master addressing rival | held or finished; address by field and standing |
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| Tourist, any affect | claimant standing; over-lengthened; evaluation layer present but misapplied |
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ones. The method is the Weksa path (`language-model.md`): packet, then
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ontology projection that can split, collapse or reweight concepts, then
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### Concept splits and collapses [E→I]
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Open Questions). Each is decomposed below into components so a lowerer can
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| **resistance** admired and absorbable | resistance read as: threat, folk art, breakout talent (`battle-royale.md` commentary list). Choice depends on whether it centers a performer or a practice. | performer-centered vs distributed agency |
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| **unpainted**, split | shame / danger / contempt / rawness / refusal / purity (the source lists these senses). Different surface forms: the sense is selected by relation and stance, not by a gloss. | decoration state, scene relation, speaker stance |
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## 5. Evidence and Invention, Summarized
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- the packet has `stance` with felt affect and restraint; the ontology maps
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**Invention (I):**
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- the two-axis status ladder and the claim/demonstrated-constraint mismatch
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- the whole phonological inventory and prosody
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- the five obligatory categories and the inverted restraint reading
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- the decoration-grammar and metaphor uses
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- the speech situations table, notably the address-to-humans row
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- the contempt-plus-affection panel pairing
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- the language's and speakers' names; the vocal tract; whether the empire is
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one language community or a family of dialects; whether non-reptilian
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imperial subjects speak it and how it marks them
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## 6. What The Lowerer Must Provide
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Interlingua rule [E]: the packet carries neutral meaning plus source-side
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communicative pressure, and target-language concept splits belong
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downstream. The earlier Rust to Dust sketch in `language-design.md` puts an
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`aesthetic_reading` block (form, discipline, spectacle, honor status) **in
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the packet**. This draft recommends moving it: those are the *imperial
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ontology's reading* of neutral facts, so they belong in the ontology
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projection, and the packet carries the facts the reading is derived from.
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[I] This is a change to existing content and the operator should rule on it.
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Fields, in order of need. "Seed" means the standard's inventory already has
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a slot. "Gap" means the standard has no field yet; per the Promotion Rule,
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the gap is first an `rtd.*` extension and is promoted only after use in two
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real packets.
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| `stance` with felt affect and `restraint` | the whole of Section 3 | seed (unmerged: `speaker-state`) |
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| **speaker** axes: field, standing in field, school or lineage, decoration state, community | status and register selection | seed slot `Speaker` (unmerged); the *values* are the gap |
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| **scene**: relative status of speaker, subject and audience; audience composition (imperial, tourist, human via subtitles) | register and address | seed slot `Scene` (unmerged) |
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| `medium` and `setting` ids for broadcast commentary | situation selection | seed (`context`) |
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| `instrument` role on predications, **for each party** | overmatch is derived from both parties' means | seed role |
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| **volition of the constraint**: chosen / compelled / unknown, as a predication feature | the line between mastery and mere lacking | gap (`rtd.` extension first) |
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| **ordering of means** (power or means gap) | vulgar overmatch | not a packet field: ontology-side order over concept ids, so the packet carries concepts and the ontology compares them |
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| referent **decoration state** (decorated / unpainted / bare-by-claim / not applicable) | status, insult, the human-undecorated reading | gap (`rtd.` extension first) |
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| referent **community** or `member_of` relation | tourist versus warrior; human versus imperial | seed relation `member_of`; community ids come from the `language-ontology` cut |
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| **focal agent** presence | spectacle versus living practice | derivable: a predication with plural or no agent role; not a new field |
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| `evidentiality` | witnessed versus inferred sincerity | seed feature (to confirm its option set) |
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| `polarity`, tense, aspect | ordinary | seed |
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| `preserve` | which nodes the commentary must keep | seed (`constraints`) |
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Fields the draft deliberately does **not** request: `aesthetic_reading`,
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`honor_status`, `spectacle_value` or any value judgment. The performer's
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sincerity is not telemetry, and the commentator infers it. These are
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outputs of the imperial ontology and must not be put into the packet by the
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client, or the client is deciding the language's concepts.
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## 7. Dependencies, Risks and Next Cuts
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**Dependencies.** Stance and the `Speaker` and `Scene` slots exist only on
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the `weksa-lowering/speaker-state` branch. The `language-ontology` cut
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(community and ontology-entry documents) is not landed. This spec states
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the content those cuts will hold, and does not substitute for them.
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**Risks.**
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- The inventory and the grammar are heavily invented on thin evidence. Mitigation:
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tag everything (done) and test the five obligatory categories against the
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lowerer before building roots.
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- The claim-versus-constraint ladder risks making the language a *status-code
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detector*. The source's hold is that honor is devotion, not rank. Test:
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can the grammar say a bare-by-claim performance without calling it low?
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- Draft collides with `language-design.md`'s packet-side `aesthetic_reading`.
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Resolved by the recommendation in Section 6 if ruled.
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**Next cuts, in order.**
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1. Operator rulings on the forks below.
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2. A first corpus slice: ten broadcast-commentary utterances, each decomposed
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to a packet (neutral facts plus stance), with the expected surface *category*
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(finish class, evaluation layer) and no words yet.
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3. The selection table for Section 3's first five cases.
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4. A root set from the field concepts, and a naming brief for the language.
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5. An orthography and a pronunciation lowering.
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**Forks for the operator (recommendations given).**
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- Move `aesthetic_reading` out of the packet into the ontology. *Recommend:
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yes.*
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- Is a two-axis status ladder right, or should honor be flat within a field?
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*Recommend: two axes, because tourists need a place.*
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- Is inverted restraint (restraint as display of virtue) the intended reading?
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*Recommend: yes, it follows from "chosen constraint is mastery".*
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- Is the vocal tract reptilian-literal or a human-stylized invention?
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*Recommend: human-pronounceable stylization with length as ornament, so
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the first corpus does not wait on phonetics.*
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